Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (e.g., 'the park' → 'parks' or 'the park', 'playground on the park' → 'playground in the park'), and include one specific detail (what you liked doing) linked with a connecting word. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they had great playgrounds. For example, I often went with my dad and friends and spent the whole afternoon on the swings and slides, which made it a very memorable part of my childhood.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and cohesion. Use a clear topic sentence, then add specific examples with linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'because'). Correct verb forms ('gives me a very relaxing environment' → 'provides a relaxing environment', 'having a picnic' → 'have picnics'). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they provide a relaxing environment. For example, I often go to read books or have picnics with friends, which helps me unwind after a busy week.

Gợi ý: Correct article and preposition use and make ideas clearer with linking words. Start with a direct answer, then explain reasons with specific details (e.g., overcrowding, lack of green space). Use plural/singular consistently ('a couple of parks', 'too small' → 'too small/too few'). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because the existing ones are few and often overcrowded. For instance, the two small parks nearby are usually full, so larger and more accessible parks would give residents better places to relax and exercise.

Gợi ý: Be concise and use more precise vocabulary. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons or expectations using linking words ('because', 'for example'). Correct phrasing ('really big park' → 'a very large, green oasis', 'build city' → 'bustling city'). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit Central Park in New York because it is a vast green oasis in the heart of a bustling city. I'm curious to see its landscapes and how people use the space for leisure, such as walking, boating, or picnicking.

× Yes, I liked going to the park as a child because it's really good.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park as a child because it was really nice.

The sentence mixes present tense 'it's' with past context 'liked'. Replace 'it's' with 'it was' for tense consistency and use 'nice' instead of 'good' for natural description.

× It has really good playground on the park and I used to go there with my dad and play with my friends there.

✓ It had a really good playground in the park, and I used to go there with my dad and play with my friends.

The original uses present 'has' with past context; change to past 'had'. Also 'on the park' is incorrect preposition and article usage — use 'in the park'. Remove the repeated 'there' at the end for conciseness.

× I really enjoyed playing there and I played for a whole day.

✓ I really enjoyed playing there and I would play for a whole day.

Using 'played' suggests a single past event; 'would play' or 'used to play' better expresses habitual past action. Use consistent habitual past form.

× Yes, I still like to go into parks because it gives me very relaxing environment.

✓ Yes, I still like to go to parks because they give me a very relaxing environment.

Use 'go to parks' not 'go into parks' and match plural 'parks' with plural verb 'they give'. Add article 'a' before 'very relaxing environment'.

× I like to go to the park and read books or having a picnic with my friends and it's really relaxing to me.

✓ I like to go to the park and read books or have a picnic with my friends, and it's really relaxing for me.

Parallel structure requires 'read' and 'have' (both base forms) after 'like to'. Also use 'for me' rather than 'to me' for 'relaxing'.

× Yes, I would like to see more parks at my city.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

Use preposition 'in' with 'city' not 'at'. 'In my city' is the correct collocation.

× There are a couple parks at my city but it's still too small for me and there's more people in my city so I hope there's more usable and bigger parks nearby.

✓ There are a couple of parks in my city, but it is still too small for me and there are more people in my city, so I hope there are more usable and larger parks nearby.

'A couple' requires 'of' before the plural noun. Use 'in my city' not 'at'. 'It' refers to the city, so 'it is still too small' is correct. Use 'there are' with plural 'people'. Use 'larger' instead of 'bigger' for more natural adjective choice.

× Yes, in the future I want to visit Central Park in New York City.

✓ Yes, in the future I want to visit Central Park in New York City.

This sentence is grammatically correct and matches future intention; no change needed.

× I heard that it's really big park and nature friendly park just inside the build city, so I'm really curious about how it will be and how people will enjoy their leisure time.

✓ I heard that it is a really big and nature-friendly park inside the built city, so I'm really curious about what it will be like and how people will enjoy their leisure time.

Add article 'a' before 'really big park'. Use hyphenated adjective 'nature-friendly'. 'Build city' is incorrect; use 'built city' or 'the built-up city'. Change 'how it will be' to 'what it will be like' for natural phrasing.