Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (use past tense consistently), simplify phrasing and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one specific supporting detail with linking words. Also correct verb forms and prepositions (e.g., "enjoyed going to the park", "after school").

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to the park as a child. For example, my friends and I often played volleyball and cricket there after school, which made those afternoons really fun and lively.

Gợi ý: Use natural expressions and correct collocations ("go to the park", not "go for a bath"), keep it concise and coherent. Begin with a direct topic sentence in present tense, then add a specific reason using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so"). Avoid repeating sports already mentioned unless adding new information.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually go there to relax after a busy study day and to play sports like volleyball with my friends, which helps me unwind.

Gợi ý: Make your opinion clear and give specific reasons. Use correct grammar ("it would give me the chance to...", "try new equipment") and avoid repetition. Use linking words like "because" and "for example" to organize reasons logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. More parks would give me the chance to explore new areas and meet different people, and they might offer equipment or facilities that our current parks don't have.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and concise phrasing: present perfect or future plans. State the park and give one specific detail about why you want to visit. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "so") and correct verbs ("have prepared").

Ví dụ: Yes, there is a newly built park near my district that I want to visit with my friends. We have already planned to go next month because it has modern play equipment that we want to try.

× When I was a child, I really enjoy for going to park with my friends for to play various sports there.

✓ When I was a child, I really enjoyed going to the park with my friends to play various sports there.

The sentence mixes past context with present tense 'enjoy' so use past tense 'enjoyed' (Problem type 6). Remove incorrect prepositions 'for' before gerund and 'for to play' — use infinitive or gerund correctly: 'to play' or 'playing'. Add the definite article 'the' before 'park' because a specific park is implied (also addresses article error but primary issue is tense and preposition). Suggestion: match verb tense to the time phrase and use correct verb forms and articles.

× We used to play volleyball and cricket in the park and enjoy very much after our school.

✓ We used to play volleyball and cricket in the park and enjoyed ourselves very much after school.

After 'used to' the habitual past is described so 'enjoy' must be past 'enjoyed' (Problem type 5). Also 'enjoy very much' needs a reflexive object 'ourselves' to be natural, and 'after our school' is incorrect — say 'after school'. Suggestion: use past tense and appropriate object pronoun for clarity.

× Yes, of course, I also still go for a bath to relax my mind and after busy study schedule to spend time with my friends and to play various sports like volleyball, cricket.

✓ Yes, of course. I still take baths to relax and, after a busy study schedule, spend time with my friends and play sports like volleyball and cricket.

'Go for a bath' is nonstandard; use 'take a bath' or 'take baths' and match aspect (habitual) with present simple 'take'. Remove unnecessary 'to' before 'spend' and 'play' (infinitive form not required after 'and'). Add articles 'a busy study schedule'. Also punctuation improves clarity. Suggestion: use standard collocations ('take a bath'), correct verb forms, and include articles where needed.

× Yes, I love to see more parks in our city because it's give me a feeling of to add to explore new parks and to make new friends there and try new equipments which are not in my current parks park.

✓ Yes, I would love to see more parks in our city because it gives me the chance to explore new parks, make new friends there, and try new equipment that is not available in the parks near me.

Multiple issues: 'love to see' is acceptable but 'it's give' should be 'it gives' (subject-verb agreement/present tense) — primary fix here is present tense (Problem type 6) and subject-verb agreement (Problem type 27). Also 'feeling of to add to explore' is ungrammatical; use 'the chance to explore' or gerund forms. 'Try new equipments' — 'equipment' is uncountable, use singular 'equipment' (quantifier/article error). 'current parks park' is redundant and incorrect. Suggestion: use correct verb form 'gives', simplify expression to 'chance to explore', use uncountable noun 'equipment', and correct phrasing for location.

× Yes, there is a park nearby my district which is newly built which I want to explore with my friends and we have prepare a plan for the next month that we have to visit and try new equipments which are installed there.

✓ Yes, there is a newly built park near my district that I want to explore with my friends, and we have prepared a plan to visit next month and try the new equipment installed there.

'There is a park nearby my district' is awkward; 'near my district' is better. 'Which is newly built which I want' uses excessive 'which' clauses; restructure. 'We have prepare' should be past participle 'prepared' after 'have' (Problem type 9). 'For the next month that we have to visit' is awkward — use 'to visit next month'. 'New equipments' — 'equipment' is uncountable (quantifier/article issue). Suggestion: use correct past participle after perfect auxiliary, simplify relative clauses, and use uncountable 'equipment' with appropriate articles.