Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you liked parks, then give one or two specific reasons or memories using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetitions and incorrect verb forms (e.g., "used to", "was fond of", "felt relaxed").

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. After school I was often tired, so I enjoyed relaxing on the grass and playing on the swings. For example, I remember meeting my friends there every afternoon, which made those days feel special.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and correct grammar: use present simple or present perfect correctly. Give a clear reason and one specific activity you do in the park. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I often visit them after a long day because walking among trees helps me relax. For instance, I usually sit on a bench and read for thirty minutes, which clears my mind.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons and one short example. Use correct word choice and grammar ("population density", "fresh air"). Use linking phrases like "because", "for example", or "as a result" to structure your reply.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because the population density is rising and people need access to fresh air. For example, a new park near my building would provide a place for families to exercise and children to play.

Gợi ý: Answer clearly and give specific details about the park and why it appeals to you. Avoid vague descriptions and correct grammar ("a park-like apartment complex", "fresh air"). Keep it concise and include a linking phrase to add one reason or example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit a particular green complex in Shanghai that combines apartments with parkland. I’m interested because residents can enjoy gardens and clean air right outside their windows, which seems ideal for a healthy lifestyle.

× I used to really off fond of go to parks because I always come from school to home.

✓ I used to be really fond of going to parks because I always came home from school.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and word order. 'Used to' requires the base verb 'be' for a state: 'used to be'. 'Fond of' is followed by a gerund, so 'go' should be 'going'. 'Come from school to home' is incorrect word order and tense; use the past tense 'came' and the idiomatic phrase 'came home from school'. Also remove the extraneous word 'off'. Suggestion: Use 'used to be' for past habitual states and follow 'fond of' with an -ing verb.

× That makes me made me really exhausted.

✓ That made me really exhausted.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present 'makes' with past 'made'. Since the context describes past feelings, use the past simple 'made'. Remove the redundant 'makes' or 'me' duplication. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent; for past narratives use past simple verbs.

× So when I used to go to parks I feel so convinced.

✓ So when I used to go to parks I felt so relieved.

The sentence mixes 'used to' (past habitual) with present 'feel'; the verb should be past: 'felt'. 'Convinced' is not the correct adjective for the intended meaning; 'relieved' or 'refreshed' fits better. Suggestion: Match tense after 'used to' and choose appropriate adjective; use 'felt refreshed/relieved'.

× Most probably I really enjoy going to parks still, even though now I've grown still I love to go to parks for have some relaxations or have a good time because after and after having an exhausted day, I'd like to have some leisure time in park.

✓ I still enjoy going to parks; even though I'm grown now, I love going to parks to relax or have a good time, because after an exhausting day I like to spend some leisure time in the park.

Multiple errors: tense and aspect inconsistencies ('enjoy' and 'I've grown' -> use 'I'm grown' or better 'I'm grown up'), word order ('for have some relaxations' incorrect; use 'to relax'), article use ('in park' -> 'in the park'), and awkward repetition ('after and after'). Replace 'having an exhausted day' with 'an exhausting day'. Suggestion: Use 'enjoy going' for habitual present, 'I'm grown up' or 'I'm older' for current state, use infinitive 'to relax', and include appropriate articles.

× I'd absolutely love to see more parks in my city because more and more people are growing and the the density of my city increased due to more populations so people can't go to fresh air or have a good time so it's a good option to have.

✓ I'd absolutely love to see more parks in my city because the population is growing and the density of the city has increased, so people can't get fresh air or have a good time; more parks would be a good option.

Errors include tense ('are growing' ok but 'increased' should be 'has increased' to connect present growth), repetition ('more populations' incorrect), article and noun usage ('go to fresh air' -> 'get fresh air'), and wordiness. Recast second clause and use conditional/modal idea clearly. Suggestion: Use 'population is growing' and present perfect 'has increased' to show change up to the present; use 'get fresh air' and simplify sentences.

× Yes, there is some specific parks that I'd like to visit.

✓ Yes, there are some specific parks that I'd like to visit.

Subject 'parks' is plural, so use plural 'there are' not 'there is'. Also 'some specific parks' is acceptable. Suggestion: Ensure 'there is/are' agrees with the noun number.

× The one is, uh, situated in Shanghai.

✓ One of them is situated in Shanghai.

'The one is' is slightly awkward; when referring to one of several parks, say 'One of them is situated in Shanghai.' This clarifies reference. Suggestion: Use 'one of them' to refer to a specific item within a group.

× It's not a typical park, but it's an apartment look alike where people live.

✓ It's not a typical park; it's an apartment-like complex where people live.

'Apartment look alike' is incorrect structure; use the adjective 'apartment-like' or 'apartment-style' and 'complex' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: Use hyphenated compound adjectives (apartment-like) and appropriate nouns.

× I'd like to live in that apartment so that I can live in greenery and have a fresh air.

✓ I'd like to live in that apartment so that I can live among greenery and have fresh air.

'Live in greenery' is unidiomatic; use 'live among greenery' or 'be surrounded by greenery'. Also 'have a fresh air' incorrect article; use 'have fresh air' (uncountable). Suggestion: Use 'among' or 'surrounded by' with 'greenery' and omit 'a' before 'fresh air'.