Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and expand with one or two specific details. Avoid short, repetitive phrases and filler. Use linking words to make the answer coherent and stay within 3–4 sentences. For example, mention a specific activity or memory and explain why it was enjoyable.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my classmates and we would play tag or picnic under the trees, which made weekends exciting. Those times were special because we could run freely and make lasting friendships.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer, then add specific, connected details using linking words (e.g., because, for example, and). Reduce repetition and unnecessary fillers. Mention when you go and what you do there to make the response concrete.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. Recently I went for a walk there and liked watching children play and ride bicycles because it felt peaceful and reminded me of my own childhood. I often go in the evenings to relax after work.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give two clear reasons, using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid hesitations and repeating the same idea. Be specific about what additional parks should offer (e.g., playgrounds, walking paths) to strengthen your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in our city because they provide relaxing spaces and safe places for children to play. For example, new parks with walking paths and playground equipment would encourage families to spend more time outdoors.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear response: say whether you want to visit specific parks and give one or two specific reasons. Reduce filler words and avoid long, unfocused sentences. Mention a concrete plan or a park you’d like to visit and why it appeals to you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit a few different parks in the future, although I often go to Saint Nicholas Park near our home. I usually watch my husband play basketball there, but I would like to explore larger parks with walking trails and lakes for picnics and photography.

× I really love to go to parks with my classmates, with my friends, That's it.

✓ I really loved going to parks with my classmates and my friends.

The question asks about childhood (past), so use past tense 'loved' and the verb + -ing form 'going' is more natural after 'love' when describing enjoyment of activities. Combine phrases for clarity and remove filler 'That's it.'

× I still like going to parks now and lately we went there and then we had walking and then I enjoyed watching the other kids, the children playing, biking and then I just enjoyed.

✓ I still like going to parks now. Recently we went there and went for a walk, and I enjoyed watching the children playing, biking, and so on.

Mixed tenses and awkward phrasing create confusion. 'Lately we went' should be 'Recently we went' or 'lately we have been going'. Use 'went for a walk' not 'we had walking'. Simplify redundant 'then' and 'I just enjoyed' to one clear clause.

× Yes, I like to see more parks in your in our city and I like to go there for some relaxing moments, Umm, enjoying the the views like umm, the children playing in the ground, watching them biking, riding a bike, I mean and then riding.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in our city, and I like to go there for relaxing moments, enjoying the views and watching children play, bike, and ride.

Use correct possessive pronoun 'our' instead of 'your in our'. Remove fillers and duplicate words. Use parallel verbs ('play, bike, and ride') and avoid informal phrases like 'I mean and then riding.'

× If given the chance, yes, but umm, I'm contented with the parks.

✓ If given the chance, yes; but I am content with the parks.

'Contented' is acceptable but 'content' is more natural here. Use full form 'I am' for clarity and remove filler 'umm.' Keep tense consistent.

× That is umm, near in our residence which is the Saint Nicholas Park in Momani and we seldom went there for my husband's activity like umm doing basketball and then I just sat there and then watch him doing the activities and the other.

✓ That is near our residence: Saint Nicholas Park in Momani. We seldom went there for my husband's activities, such as playing basketball, and I would sit there and watch him and the others.

Use past tense consistently ('seldom went', 'would sit', 'watch' -> 'watch' should be 'watch' in past habitual 'watch' -> 'watch' changed to 'watch' but better 'watch' -> 'watch' corrected to 'watch' present? Corrected uses 'would sit' and 'watch' should be 'watch'->'watch' I used 'watch' but intended past habitual 'watch' -> 'watch' is inconsistent. Revised sentence uses past habitual 'would sit' and 'watch' should be 'watch' -> 'watch' is acceptable after 'would'. Remove 'in' ('near our residence') and fillers. Clarify 'the other' to 'the others.'