Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Hãy trả lời trực tiếp hơn bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sửa ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể với liên từ để mạch lạc. Ví dụ: nêu lý do chính (thích chơi đồ chơi, thích ở cùng anh chị em), bổ sung một ví dụ ngắn về hoạt động yêu thích. Chú ý thì quá khứ và sử dụng đại từ đúng (she → they).

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t like going to parks as a child. I preferred staying at home because I enjoyed playing with my toys and spending time with my siblings. For example, we often built small forts and played board games together, which felt safer and more fun than going outside.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Sử dụng cấu trúc ngắn gọn, sửa lỗi phát âm ngữ pháp (want to go, especially), loại bỏ lặp từ và dùng linking words để giải thích tần suất và lý do. Nêu một hoạt động cụ thể bạn làm ở công viên (ví dụ: đi bộ, đọc sách) để cụ thể hóa nội dung.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do enjoy going to parks occasionally. Especially in spring, I like to walk among the trees and sit on a bench to read, because the green space helps me relax and feel refreshed.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp và chính xác (there aren't many green spaces). Tránh lỗi từ vựng không đúng (oven → out of town?) và cấu trúc thừa. Bổ sung lý do vì sao cần thêm công viên (giảm ô nhiễm, giải trí) và một đề xuất cụ thể (trồng thêm cây, tạo công viên nhỏ).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like more parks in my city. There aren’t many green spaces in the capital, so people often have to travel outside the city to find a park. More small neighbourhood parks would improve air quality and provide places for families to relax.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Trả lời rõ ràng và dùng thì phù hợp (When I think about parks…). Sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng (imaginings → imagination or I imagine; read on the internet; big pop → big parks or popular parks). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về công viên ở Singapore bạn muốn thăm và lý do (ví dụ: Gardens by the Bay, đền kết cấu, cây xanh).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit some parks in Singapore in the future. For instance, Gardens by the Bay looks amazing on the internet because of its futuristic Supertrees and diverse plant collections, and I think it would be inspiring to see such well-designed green spaces in person.

× Actually, no, I'm not that kind of outdoor person.

✓ Actually, no, I wasn't that kind of outdoor person as a child.

The student refers to childhood in the question, so the time frame is past; use past tense 'was' and add 'as a child' for clarity. Use of pronoun 'that' is acceptable but time consistency requires change.

× I would rather, I would rather stay at home as a child because when I stay at home I can play with my own toys and also have my siblings, so she could be my friend.

✓ I would rather have stayed at home as a child because when I stayed at home I could play with my own toys and also play with my siblings, so they could be my friends.

The sentence mixes conditional/modal 'would rather' with present tense verbs. For past preference use 'would rather have + past participle' or simply 'would rather have stayed'. Also 'have my siblings' is incorrect: use 'play with my siblings' and plural pronoun 'they' for siblings. Maintain past tense consistency.

× And yeah, I really enjoy stay at home.

✓ And yeah, I really enjoyed staying at home.

After 'enjoy' the gerund form is required: 'enjoy staying'. Also because the context is childhood, use past tense 'enjoyed'.

× Yes, from time to time I really want to going outside espe especially go to the park because I really enjoy the green space with the big plans and also can spend spend my time between the natures.

✓ Yes, from time to time I really want to go outside, especially to the park, because I really enjoy green spaces with big plants and can spend my time in nature.

Use base verb after 'want to' (not 'going'). Correct spelling 'especially'. 'Green space' plural 'green spaces' or 'the green space' and 'big plans' should be 'big plants'. 'Spend my time between the natures' is ungrammatical; use 'spend my time in nature'. Remove repeated word 'spend'.

× Yes, I'm currently living in the capital of Vietnam right now, so as you know, there's aren't much of green space in the city, so I have to really go to the oven to enjoy the park there.

✓ Yes, I'm currently living in the capital of Vietnam, so as you know, there isn't much green space in the city, so I have to go out of town to enjoy a park.

Use 'there isn't' (singular) for 'much green space'. 'Much of green space' is incorrect; use 'much green space'. 'Go to the oven' is incorrect and likely a mistranslation; use 'go out of town' if parks are outside the city. Remove redundant 'right now' when 'currently' is used.

× Yes, when talk about parks I always have an imaginations for Singapore parks because I read some Internet that Singapore had like a great environment and had many of big pop.

✓ Yes, when I talk about parks I always imagine Singapore's parks because I read on the Internet that Singapore has a great environment and many big parks.

Include subject 'I' ('when I talk'). 'Have an imaginations' is wrong: use 'always imagine' or 'have an imagination' (singular). 'Read some Internet' should be 'read on the Internet'. Use present tense 'has' for a current fact. 'Many of big pop' is garbled; correct to 'many big parks'.