Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and directly answer the question first (Yes/No), then give 1–2 specific supporting details. Use correct tense and avoid repetition. For example, say whether you liked parks, give a reason or memory, and keep sentences short and grammatically correct.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I rarely went to parks because I was very shy and usually stayed at home with my parents. However, I remember enjoying quiet moments under trees when we occasionally visited one.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., but, however, sometimes). Avoid unnecessary fillers and correct small grammar errors (e.g., 'lying' not 'laying').

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer staying in my cozy room to relax, but when I feel energetic I enjoy going to parks with friends or my husband to walk and take photos.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and then provide a couple of specific, well-formed reasons. Use linking words (e.g., because, so) and correct word forms (e.g., 'fascinating', 'fruit trees'). Avoid short fragmented sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, absolutely. There is only one park near my home, so more parks would provide more green space. The current park is lovely with many flowering plants and several fruit trees, which I find really fascinating.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opening sentence and then explain with specific details (which countries or types of parks) and link ideas with simple connectors (e.g., because, if). Avoid repetition like 'get a chance or get the opportunity'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit parks abroad because I plan to study overseas. For example, I hope to see large botanical gardens in the UK and national parks in Canada to experience different plants and scenery.

× I actually don't remember anything of my childhood, but what I remember was that in my childhood I was actually quite introvert and I actually don't go anywhere, didn't went anywhere with my without my parents because I am quite.

✓ I actually don't remember much from my childhood, but what I do recall is that I was quite introverted and I didn't go anywhere without my parents because I was shy.

Errors: incorrect tense consistency and verb forms, wrong preposition, adjective/adverb form, and double negatives. 'Anything of my childhood' is unnatural; use 'much from my childhood'. Maintain tense consistency: use past tense 'was' and 'didn't go' (not 'didn't went'). 'Introvert' should be adjective 'introverted'. 'Because I am quite' is incomplete; use 'because I was shy'. Suggestions: use past tense consistently for childhood, use correct past auxiliary + base verb for negatives, use proper adjective forms and natural prepositions.

× I think it depends on my mood. Sometimes I feel like just laying in my bed in my comfortable cozy room and other than other time I love to go outside with my friends or my husband and wearing sari clicking some pictures. Yeah.

✓ I think it depends on my mood. Sometimes I feel like just lying in my bed in my comfortable, cozy room, and other times I love to go outside with my friends or my husband, wearing a sari and taking some pictures.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'laying' should be 'lying' (verb form usage), incorrect phrase 'other than other time' should be 'other times', missing article 'a sari', and wrong verb 'clicking' (use 'taking' for photos). Also punctuation and adjective order: 'comfortable, cozy room'. Suggestions: use 'lying' for reclining, 'other times' for frequency, include articles where needed, and use natural collocations like 'taking pictures'.

× Yeah, absolutely. Because in my city where I live, there is only one park near my home. And that park is quite beautiful because there are so many plants of flowers and some fruits trees, which is quite fascination, fascinating.

✓ Yeah, absolutely. In the city where I live, there is only one park near my home. That park is quite beautiful because there are so many flower plants and some fruit trees, which is quite fascinating.

Errors: awkward phrasing 'in my city where I live' — better 'in the city where I live'; 'plants of flowers' should be 'flower plants' or simply 'flowers'; 'fruits trees' should be 'fruit trees' (no plural on the modifier). 'Fascination' (noun) is incorrect; use adjective 'fascinating'. Suggestions: use natural word order, correct noun modifiers, and proper adjective forms.

× Yes, in the future I love to explore foreign parks because my dream is to study abroad. So if I get a chance or get the opportunity to go in the abroad, then obviously I love to experience those parks and explore that.

✓ Yes, in the future I would love to explore parks abroad because my dream is to study overseas. If I get the chance to go abroad, I would obviously love to experience and explore those parks.

Errors: tense and modal usage: 'I love to' is present and not appropriate for future intention; use 'I would love to' for hypothetical future desire. 'Go in the abroad' is ungrammatical; correct is 'go abroad'. Repetition 'get a chance or get the opportunity' is redundant. 'Study abroad' is fine but 'study overseas' is a natural alternative. Suggestions: use 'would' for polite future desires, remove redundant phrases, use correct preposition 'abroad' without 'in'.