Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문법과 발음 오류가 많고 문장이 중복됩니다. 먼저 간단한 주제 문장으로 바로 답한 뒤, 구체적인 활동(예: 그네 타기, 미끄럼틀, 소풍)을 연결어로 덧붙이세요. 문장 구조(주어+동사+목적어)를 정확히 하고 불필요한 반복을 피하며 발음도 천천히 정확하게 연습하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. For example, I often played on the swings and slid down the slides with my friends, and sometimes we had picnics under the trees.

Gợi ý: 의사 전달은 되지만 중복과 불필요한 반복이 많습니다. 간단한 이유 문장(topic sentence)을 제시한 뒤, 연결어(so, because, therefore, when)를 정확하게 사용하고 구체적 빈도나 상황을 덧붙이세요. 동사의 시제와 관사(a/the) 사용에도 주의하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I like running and exercising. When I have free time, I usually go for a 30-minute jog on the park paths to stay fit.

Gợi ý: 의견 표현은 명확하나 논리 전개가 어색하고 단어 선택과 문법 오류가 있습니다. 먼저 주제 문장으로 동의 여부를 말한 후, 이유를 2개 정도 구체적으로 제시하세요(예: 녹지 증가, 운동 공간 제공, 가족 공간). 연결어(for example, because)와 복수형 사용을 올바르게 하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I would like to see more parks because they make the city greener and provide spaces for people to exercise. For example, families could take their children to play and adults could use the parks for walking or yoga.

Gợi ý: 뜻은 전달되지만 반복과 어휘 오류가 있습니다(Central Park는 'park', 'party' 오타). 미래 희망을 말할 때는 명확한 이유와 기대 활동을 구체적으로 적으세요. 하나의 주제 문장과 1–2개의 구체적 세부사항(볼거리, 활동, 분위기)을 연결어로 자연스럽게 이어주세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit Central Park in New York City in the future because it is a huge urban park where people relax and exercise. I want to walk along the paths, see the lakes and maybe have a picnic there.

× Yes, I really going to the park when I when I was a child because there there are many fun things in the park, for example slightly and there is a many.

✓ Yes, I really liked going to the park when I was a child because there were many fun things in the park, for example swings and slides.

Original sentence omits the auxiliary or proper verb form: 'really going' should be 'really liked going' to express past habit (use past tense + gerund). 'When I when I' is repetitive; remove duplicate. 'There there are' duplicates 'there'. Use past 'were' to match 'was a child'. 'for example slightly and there is a many' is incorrect words and count: 'slightly' is wrong; likely 'swings and slides'. Also 'a many' is ungrammatical; use no article and plural: 'many'. Suggestion: use 'liked going' for past habitual action and 'there were many' for existence in past.

× Yes, I like going to the park now because because I like running and exercising. So I so when I when I have time I I try to go to park.

✓ Yes, I like going to the park now because I like running and exercising. So when I have time I try to go to the park.

Repetition 'because because', 'So I so', 'when I when I', and duplicate 'I I' are disfluent; remove duplicates. 'go to park' needs the definite article 'the' for a specific place: 'go to the park'. Tense 'like' is present and correct; ensure subject-verb agreement and natural phrasing 'when I have time I try to go to the park'.

× Yes, definitely, definitely. I'd like to see more park because it looks more, the city looks green and people can exercise for example learning and I can see the child more.

✓ Yes, definitely. I'd like to see more parks because the city would look greener, people could exercise more, and I could see more children playing.

'more park' needs plural 'more parks'. 'it looks more, the city looks green' is awkward; use comparative 'greener' and specify subject 'the city would look greener'. 'people can exercise for example learning' is unclear; 'exercise more' suits. 'I can see the child more' should be plural 'more children' or 'more children playing'. Also modal consistency: 'I'd like to see' + conditional phrasing 'would look'. Use parallel structure in list.

× Ye, yes, I like, I like to go to the Central Park in the New York City because I thought the Central Park is the biggest party in the US and there are many people to take a rest and exercise.

✓ Yes, I would like to go to Central Park in New York City because I think Central Park is one of the biggest parks in the US and many people go there to relax and exercise.

'Ye' is a typo. 'I like to go' is fine but 'would like to go' matches future desire. 'the Central Park in the New York City' uses incorrect articles: drop 'the' before city name and before 'Central Park' use no article or 'Central Park' is proper noun without 'the'. 'I thought' (past) should be 'I think' for current opinion. 'biggest party' is wrong word 'party' -> 'park'. 'there are many people to take a rest and exercise' is awkward; use 'many people go there to relax and exercise'. Maintain present simple for general facts.