Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one or two specific details using linking words. Watch verb tense (use past), articles, and avoid repeating words (e.g., “kids” twice).

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, my parents often took my brother and me to the local park, where we played on swings and made friends with neighborhood children, which kept us active and happy.

Gợi ý: Use a clear present-tense topic sentence and improve grammar (habitual → used to or I have a habit of). Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, because, and, which). Be concise and include a specific routine or benefit.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I usually exercise there three times a week. For instance, I run along the paths and do stretching exercises, which boosts my energy and reduces stress thanks to the peaceful greenery.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and correct grammar (provide → they provide; make → make the environment cooler). Use specific reasons and avoid vague phrases like “very sensible” and “maintain your physics.” Explain concrete benefits (air quality, recreation, community spaces) with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they improve air quality and make the area cooler. In addition, parks offer places for exercise and social activities, which helps reduce stress and encourages a healthier lifestyle.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the park and use conditional/time phrases correctly. Be specific about when and what you will do; use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating “help” and “there.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Central Park in my city when I have free time from work. I plan to go there on weekends to exercise, meet friends, and play football, because these activities help me relax and stay fit.

× Yes, I like to going to parks as a child because it is a very great place to burn your energy and meet new kids, other kids and my parents always take me and my brother to the parks when we we were kids and.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because they were great places to burn off energy and meet other children, and my parents always took my brother and me to the parks when we were kids.

The student uses present tense 'like' and incorrect verb form 'to going' for a past habitual action. Use past tense 'liked' and the gerund 'going'. 'It is a very great place' should be pluralized to 'they were great places' to match 'parks'. 'Burn your energy' is better phrased 'burn off energy'. 'Other kids, other kids' is redundant; use 'other children'. Pronoun order and object form should be 'my brother and me'. Also remove the trailing conjunction and repeated words. Suggestion: when speaking about past habits, use past simple and plural agreement where needed.

× I still like to going to parks now because I am very habitual of exercising and park is a place where you can exercise and run which helps to increase your energy and reduce your stress. The greenery of parks also help.

✓ I still like going to parks now because I have a habit of exercising, and a park is a place where you can exercise and run, which helps increase your energy and reduce stress. The greenery of parks also helps.

'Like to going' mixes infinitive + gerund; use either 'like to go' or 'like going' — here 'like going' is natural. 'I am very habitual of exercising' is unidiomatic; use 'I have a habit of exercising' or 'I exercise regularly'. 'Park is a place' needs an article 'a park'. 'Helps to increase' can be 'helps increase'. 'Reduce your stress' better as 'reduce stress'. Subject-verb agreement: 'the greenery of parks also help' should be 'helps' because 'greenery' is singular. Suggest practicing gerund vs infinitive forms and subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I also like to see more parks in my city because it provides the oxygen and make the environment very cool and very sensible which helps to reduce the stress as well and it also helps to maintain your physics.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide oxygen and make the environment cooler and more pleasant, which helps reduce stress, and they also help maintain your physical health.

'Like to see more parks' is acceptable but 'also like' is vague; 'would like' is more natural for preference. 'It provides the oxygen' incorrectly uses singular pronoun and 'the oxygen' — use plural 'they provide oxygen' to match 'parks'. 'Make the environment very cool and very sensible' is incorrect: 'cooler and more pleasant' is appropriate. 'Sensible' is wrong word choice. 'Maintain your physics' is incorrect; intended meaning is 'physical health' or 'fitness'. Also adjust plural agreement for verbs. Suggest using correct quantifiers and collocations like 'provide oxygen' and 'physical health'.

× There is a park named Central Park in our city and I want to go there whenever I have the free time from my job and it helps a lot to reduce stress and I also want to exercise there and play some sports with other people.

✓ There is a park called Central Park in our city, and I want to go there whenever I have free time from my job. It helps a lot to reduce stress, and I also want to exercise there and play sports with other people.

The original sentence is long and run-on; break into two sentences for clarity. 'Named Central Park' is acceptable but 'called Central Park' is more natural. 'Whenever I have the free time from my job' should be 'whenever I have free time from my job' — drop the article. Also separate ideas with a period or conjunctions to avoid run-on. Suggest practicing sentence splitting and using natural expressions like 'called' and 'free time'.