Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: ปรับโครงสร้างให้ชัดเจนและลดคำเติมเต็มที่ไม่จำเป็น ให้เริ่มด้วยประโยคหัวใจตอบตรงคำถาม แล้วให้รายละเอียดเพิ่มเติมสั้น ๆ และใช้คำเชื่อม เช่น because/so เพื่อความลื่นไหล ตัวอย่างข้อผิดพลาด: ใช้ tense ผสมกัน (present กับ past) และมีคำซ้ำ เช่น 'in there' 'in here'.

Ví dụ: I didn't like going to parks as a child. I preferred staying at home because parks were often crowded and noisy, so I felt uncomfortable. For example, large crowds made me anxious, so I avoided them.

Gợi ý: ตอบโดยใช้ tense และโครงสร้างที่ถูกต้อง เริ่มด้วยประโยคตรง ๆ จากนั้นอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างสั้น ๆ และใช้คำเชื่อม เช่น but / because เพื่อความชัดเจน ควรหลีกเลี่ยงคำไม่เป็นทางการอย่าง 'Yeah' และปรับบทพูดให้สมบูรณ์กว่าเดิม.

Ví dụ: I would like to go to parks now if I had time. However, I currently live in a school dormitory and cannot go out without permission, so I rarely visit parks.

Gợi ý: ตอบให้กระชับและใช้โครงสร้างที่ถูกต้อง เริ่มด้วยความคิดเห็นชัดเจนแล้วตามด้วยเหตุผลที่เฉพาะเจาะจง ใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น if/because/so และแก้ไวยากรณ์ (เช่น 'more comfortable to walk' → 'more comfortable places to walk'). เพิ่มตัวอย่างหรือผลลัพธ์ที่ชัดเจนขึ้น.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they would provide more comfortable places to walk and exercise. If there were more parks, people could spread out more, so each park would be less crowded.

Gợi ý: เริ่มตอบด้วยประโยคตรง ๆ ที่ระบุชื่อสถานที่และเหตุผลที่ชัดเจน ใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อนำเสนอรายละเอียดเพิ่มเติมอย่างเป็นระเบียบ แก้ไขไวยากรณ์และลำดับคำ (เช่น 'in there' ไม่จำเป็น) และยกตัวอย่างให้เฉพาะเจาะจง เช่น แบบกิจกรรมที่อยากทำในสวน.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Lumpini Park in Bangkok. I want to exercise there and join group dance activities because I have seen videos on TikTok of people doing K-pop and other dances in the park, which looks fun and energetic.

× Yeah, that's a good questions.

✓ Yeah, that's a good question.

The noun 'question' should be singular to agree with the demonstrative 'that' and the verb 'is'. Use 'question' not 'questions'. Suggestion: use singular noun when referring to one item (that is).

× when I was a child, I like to stay at home more than going to park because, uh, there are many people in there and either like, uh, some crowd people in here, so I stay at home.

✓ When I was a child, I liked to stay at home more than go to the park because there were many people there and sometimes crowds, so I stayed at home.

The sentence describes a past habit, so verbs should be in the past tense (liked, stayed). Use the infinitive 'go' after 'prefer ... to' structure (more than go to the park). Use definite article 'the' with 'park' when referring to a specific place. Simplify 'either like... some crowd people' to 'sometimes crowds'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent and use 'the' with 'park'.

× It will be a good chance if I have time to go to park, but now I am at the dormitory that I can't go out without permission of school.

✓ It would be a good opportunity if I had time to go to the park, but now I am in the dormitory and I can't go out without the school's permission.

Use conditional 'would' + past 'had' for hypothetical present possibility. 'Opportunity' fits better than 'chance' here. Use 'the park' with definite article. Use 'in the dormitory' not 'at', and 'the school's permission' requires possessive article. Suggestion: use conditional structure and correct articles and prepositions.

× Yeah.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

Single-word reply 'Yeah' is short and does not answer the examiner's question; provide a full sentence that matches the question. Suggestion: answer directly and expand briefly.

× I have been thinking about it. I think if there are more parks in my city, there will be more comfortable to walk.

✓ I have thought about it. I think if there were more parks in my city, it would be more comfortable to walk.

For hypothetical situations about improvements, use subjunctive/conditional: 'if there were... it would be...'. 'Have been thinking' is acceptable but 'have thought' is simpler here. 'More comfortable' requires 'it would be' to be grammatical. Suggestion: use conditional for hypothetical changes.

× Many people can walk in the park that they want and they will reduce the people in each park.

✓ More people could walk in whichever park they want, and this would reduce crowding in each park.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Use modal 'could' and 'whichever' for choice, and 'reduce crowding' is a clearer expression than 'reduce the people in each park'. Use conditional 'would' for hypothetical results. Suggestion: rephrase for clarity and correct modal/conditional use.

× Yet I have been thinking about it until now.

✓ I have been thinking about it until now.

'Yet' is unnecessary and awkward at the sentence start here; remove it. Use continuous present perfect 'have been thinking' to indicate ongoing thought. Suggestion: drop 'Yet' to make sentence natural.

× I want to go to Lumpini Park in Bangkok city.

✓ I want to go to Lumpini Park in Bangkok.

'Bangkok city' is redundant; native usage is 'Bangkok'. 'To Lumpini Park in Bangkok' is correct. Suggestion: omit 'city' after Bangkok.

× I want to go to exercise with many people in there.

✓ I want to go to exercise there with many people.

Place 'there' after 'exercise' and use 'with many people' to indicate company. Avoid 'in there' after 'people'. Suggestion: reorder phrase to 'exercise there with many people'.

× I have as I have seen in my Tiktok about dance and K pop or any music you want.

✓ I have seen on TikTok people dancing to K-pop and other music.

The original is fragmented and ungrammatical. Use 'seen on TikTok' (preposition 'on' for platforms), and a clear noun phrase 'people dancing to K-pop and other music'. Remove redundant 'I have as I have'. Suggestion: make a concise clause and use correct preposition for online platforms.