Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response grammatically correct, concise and include a brief supporting detail. Use past tense for childhood and add a reason or memory. Keep it to 1–2 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because I liked playing on the swings and having picnics with my family.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and natural phrasing; give a short explanation and, if possible, mention what you do instead. Keep it to 1–2 sentences and use linking words for clarity.

Ví dụ: Not really — I rarely go to parks now because my studies and work keep me busy, so I usually exercise at home instead.

Gợi ý: Correct small vocabulary and grammar errors, use linking words and be specific about benefits. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use plural/possessive forms correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they make the area greener and improve air quality. For example, families and students could use them to relax, study outdoors, or exercise on weekends.

Gợi ý: Be specific about the park name and why you want to visit it. Use correct future phrasing and give one clear reason. Keep it to 1–2 sentences and avoid vague expressions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Mini Fall Park next year because it is known for its peaceful gardens and scenic walking trails.

× Yes, I like to go in the park as a child.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park as a child.

The question asks about past habitual activity as a child, so past tense is required. 'Like' (present) is incorrect; use 'liked' or 'used to like'. Also 'go in the park' is unnatural; use 'go to the park' or 'going to the park'. Suggestion: say 'I liked going to the park as a child.'

× No, I did not going back because of study and job.

✓ No, I did not go back because of my studies and my job.

After auxiliary 'did' the base form of the verb must be used, so 'did not go' not 'did not going'. Also use plural 'studies' and include possessive 'my' for clarity. Suggestion: 'I did not go back because of my studies and my job.'

× So I did not get time to go in park.

✓ So I did not have time to go to the park.

Use 'have time' not 'get time' in this context. Preposition should be 'to the park' not 'in park', and include the article 'the'. Suggestion: 'I did not have time to go to the park.'

× Yes, I would like to see more part in my city because they make the area greener and they are good for people here.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they make the area greener and are good for people here.

'part' is incorrect; the plural 'parks' is needed. Also use 'more parks' and include plural agreement with 'they'. Article 'the' before 'area' is optional but 'the area' is natural. Suggestion: 'I would like to see more parks in my city because they make the area greener and are good for people.'

× For example family and student could go there to work and exercise in weekend.

✓ For example, families and students could go there to relax and exercise on weekends.

Use plural nouns 'families' and 'students' to match plural idea. Add comma after 'For example'. Use 'on weekends' not 'in weekend'. 'Work' is confusing in a park context; 'relax' or 'spend time' is more natural. Suggestion: 'For example, families and students could go there to relax and exercise on weekends.'

× Yes, I want to go mini fall in futures because of the environment there in its own.

✓ Yes, I want to go to Minifall in the future because of the environment there.

Use 'in the future' (singular) not 'in futures'. Place preposition 'to' before place name and capitalize proper noun 'Minifall' if it is a name. Remove unclear phrase 'in its own'. Suggestion: 'I want to go to Minifall in the future because of the environment there.'