Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Thí sinh
Did you like going to the park as the child?
Giám khảo
Do you still like going to parks now?
Thí sinh
Did you set like going to the park now?
Giám khảo
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Thí sinh
Would you like to see the Moorpark in your city?
Giám khảo
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Thí sinh
Are there any park you want to go to in the future?
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 你的回答没有直接回应问题,句子结构错误且听起来像是在重复考官的话。要在开始就直接作答,并用一到两句具体细节支持。注意时态和冠词(“as a child”,“the”不必要)。例如可以用过去时描述童年经历。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often played on swings and climbed trees with my friends, which helped me stay active and have fun.
Do you still like going to parks now?
Điểm: 15.0Gợi ý: 回答同样是重复考官话并且语法混乱(“Did you set”无意义)。必须用现在时直接回答,并补充具体近期活动以显示真实性。句子保持简短清晰,不超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy visiting parks. I usually go for a jog or read a book under a tree on weekends because it helps me relax.
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 学生把问题复述且改变了意思(提到具体地名),没有回答考官的原问题。应直接表达态度并给出理由或建议,例如城市需要更多绿色空间并说明原因。注意使用条件句或意愿表达(would like)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide safe places for families to exercise and relax.
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 再次只复述问题且语法有误(单复数、冠词问题)。应直接回答并给出具体公园名称或类型和原因,使用将来时或情态动词表达计划或愿望。
Ví dụ: Yes, I hope to visit the national park near my city next summer because I want to hike the trails and see the wildlife there.
× Did you like going to the park as the child?
✓ Yes, I did. / I liked going to the park as a child.
原句使用了疑问句“Did you like...?”但后半句“as the child”是不正确的定冠词与名词搭配。此处应采用习惯表达“as a child”(作为一个孩子/在童年时)。此外,回答应与问题时态一致,示例给出肯定回答(过去时)或改写为陈述句“ I liked...”以匹配过去时。建议:将“the child”改为“a child”;若回答问题,可直接用短答“Yes, I did.” 或完整句“I liked going to the park as a child.”
× Did you set like going to the park now?
✓ Do you still like going to parks now?
原句使用了过去式助动词“Did”但句意为现在的喜好,应使用一般现在时疑问“Do you...?”。另外“set”是错误词,应该是“still”(仍然)。“the park”改为复数或不定冠词更自然,根据原问题可用复数“parks”。建议:使用“Do you still like...”并把“set”改为“still”。
× Would you like to see the Moorpark in your city?
✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?
原句把问题改写为“the Moorpark”,这既改变了原意又使用了错误的专有名词/冠词。原问题询问是否想在城市中看到“更多的公园”,正确表达为“more parks”。如果想指特定公园,应确保公园名称拼写与使用定冠词的适当性。建议:将“The Moorpark”替换为“more parks”。
× Are there any park you want to go to in the future?
✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
原句中“any park”与存在疑问结构“Are there any ...?”搭配时,应使用复数“parks”或不定量词后跟可数名词复数。因此将“park”改为复数“parks”。此外也可把结构改为“Is there any park...?”来使用单数。建议:在“Are there any ...”结构中使用复数名词。