Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ звучит неестественно и содержит ошибку времени. В условии нужно давать короткое прямое утверждение в настоящем или прошедшем (например, "Yes, I enjoyed..."), затем при необходимости добавить одно-две конкретные детали о том, что вам нравилось. Избегайте лишних слов и неправильных конструкций.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I liked playing on the swings and having picnics with my family, which made those visits memorable.

Gợi ý: Ответ не отвечает прямо на вопрос в начале и содержит фрагменты и неверный порядок слов. Начинайте с краткого прямого ответа (Yes/No), затем добавьте причину или пример. Используйте связки (because, so, and) для плавного перехода и избегайте обрывистых фраз.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are relaxing. For example, my friends and I often take photos and walk around the lake when we meet.

Gợi ý: Ответ очень фрагментирован и неясен. Нужно сразу дать прямой ответ (Yes/No) и объяснить причину связным предложением. Используйте конкретные причины (озеленение, отдых, спорт) и соединители (because, so, therefore). Не повторяйте слова без смысла.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide places for people to relax. More green spaces would make the city more attractive and healthier.

Gợi ý: Ответ не по теме и содержит много остановок и бессвязных фрагментов. Вопрос о будущих парках — начните с прямого ответа и назовите конкретный парк или тип парка, объясняя, почему вы хотели бы туда пойти. Используйте простые полные предложения и связки (in the future, because, for example). Тренируйте планы ответа заранее, чтобы избежать заиканий.

Ví dụ: In the future I would like to visit a large botanical garden near my city because I enjoy seeing different plants and learning about them. For example, I want to go to the city botanical park to take photos and relax.

× I was really enjoying going to parks.

✓ I really enjoyed going to parks.

The student used past continuous 'was enjoying' which implies an ongoing action at a specific time; the simple past 'enjoyed' is correct to state a habitual or general past preference. Use simple past to describe likes in childhood: 'I really enjoyed going to parks.'

× Because in the parks. We can make some photos with my friends.

✓ I like parks because we can take photos with my friends.

Sentence fragments and tense mismatch: 'Because in the parks.' is a fragment. Use present simple 'I like' for current preferences and 'can take' (ability) for what you do there. Also use 'take photos' not 'make photos.' Combine into one complete sentence: 'I like parks because we can take photos with my friends.'

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

The preposition 'in' needs an object; it's incomplete. Add 'my city' to specify location. Also 'see more parks in my city' is the correct full phrase.

× Because I thought that I love. City or country More. And beautiful. And pretty.

✓ Because I think I love the city more; it is more beautiful and prettier.

Original is broken into fragments and tenses are inconsistent: 'thought' (past) vs 'love' (present). Use present 'think' for current opinion. Combine fragments into coherent comparative sentence and use comparative forms 'more beautiful' or 'prettier'. 'City or country more' should be 'I love the city more.'

× When I was young, I. I usually, uh, I was you. I was usually going to. Uh, Spain and anything else? In the future I wanna do.

✓ When I was young, I usually went to Spain. In the future I want to travel to more places.

Many fragments and incorrect verb forms: 'I was you' and 'I was usually going to' are wrong. Use simple past 'I usually went' for habitual past actions. For future intention use 'I want to' or 'I want to travel.' Avoid colloquial 'wanna' in formal correction and make sentences complete and clear.