Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, avoid repetition, correct plural/singular and verb forms, and add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were peaceful and relaxing. I often went there with my parents, and we used to play games like hide-and-seek. For example, I remember spending whole afternoons exploring the bushes and laughing with my siblings.

Gợi ý: Use consistent verb forms and plural nouns, and tighten the response. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "because" or "and"). Avoid unnecessary words like "to" before gerunds incorrectly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful and offer fresh air. For example, I often spend an hour walking and chatting with friends or playing hide-and-seek with my younger cousins.

Gợi ý: Be concise and avoid repetition. Use plural form 'parks' and give specific reasons and activities with linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example'). Do not reference earlier responses unnecessarily. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for recreation. For example, new parks would allow people to have picnics, practise dancing, and relax away from traffic noise.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar (plural forms, article use) and avoid vague phrases like 'do whatever we want.' Give one clear reason and a specific plan, and finish the sentence. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'for example'. Keep to two sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit several parks, but my top choice is Godavari Park because it has a peaceful atmosphere and large gardens. For instance, I plan to go there with my mother to have a picnic and take a long walk along the riverbank.

× Yes, I love to go into park when I was a child because they were peaceful and relaxing.

✓ Yes, I loved going to the park when I was a child because they were peaceful and relaxing.

The sentence mixes present tense 'love' with past time 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'loved' and change 'to go into park' to the natural gerund 'going to the park'. Also use the singular countable noun 'the park' with the definite article. Suggestion: Match tense to the time reference and use 'the park' and gerund after 'love/loved'.

× I often went there with my parents and we used to play games like hide and seeks which really enjoyed and I still want to think.

✓ I often went there with my parents and we used to play games like hide and seek, which I really enjoyed and still remember.

Errors: 'hide and seeks' is incorrect pluralization; the correct form is 'hide and seek' (fixed phrase). 'which really enjoyed' lacks a subject and proper verb form; add 'I' and simple past 'enjoyed'. 'I still want to think' is awkward; use 'still remember' to express continuing recollection. Use commas to separate clauses.

× Yes, I still like going to park because they are peaceful and relaxing.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park because it is peaceful and relaxing.

Use the definite article 'the park' for a general place. 'They are' mismatches singular 'park'; use 'it is' or refer to 'parks' plural. Here the student speaks generally about 'the park' so use singular agreement. Alternatively, 'parks ... they are' if plural.

× I often go there with my friends and parents to play games like hide and seek and I enjoy the fresh air and open space when we spend an hour to walking and chatting.

✓ I often go there with my friends and parents to play games like hide and seek, and I enjoy the fresh air and open space when we spend an hour walking and chatting.

After 'spend an hour' use the -ing form 'walking' (not 'to walking'). Use a comma before the conjunction for clarity. Maintain parallel gerund forms 'walking and chatting'.

× Yes, I really like to see more park in my city because I already said that I really want to go park so and there we can do several things like picnic, dancing and so it they are very peaceful and relaxing, so we can spend most of the time.

✓ Yes, I would really like to see more parks in my city because I already said that I want to go to parks, and there we can do several things like have a picnic, dance, and relax; they are peaceful and relaxing, so we can spend a lot of time there.

Multiple issues: 'more park' should be plural 'more parks'. Use 'want to go to parks' with preposition 'to'. 'picnic, dancing' should be parallel verbs or noun phrases: 'have a picnic, dance, and relax'. 'so it they are' is garbled; restructure to 'they are peaceful and relaxing'. Replace 'most of the time' with 'a lot of time' for naturalness.

× Yes, there are several park I really want to go, but Godavari Park is my favorite park.

✓ Yes, there are several parks I really want to go to, but Godavari Park is my favorite.

Use plural 'parks' to match 'several'. Add the preposition 'to' after 'want to go'. Repeating 'park' after the proper noun is unnecessary; 'Godavari Park is my favorite' is concise and correct.

× So I really want to go there because there are very peaceful environment and we can do whatever we want.

✓ So I really want to go there because it has a very peaceful environment and we can do whatever we want.

'There are very peaceful environment' is incorrect agreement: 'environment' is singular, so use 'it has a very peaceful environment' or 'there is a very peaceful environment'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and natural expression 'has a very peaceful environment'.

× I like to go with my mother and.

✓ I like to go with my mother.

The original sentence ends with an unfinished conjunction 'and' and lacks a complete second element, making it incomplete. Remove the trailing 'and' or add another person/activity. Ensure sentences are complete with subject and verb.