Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had to like to go in parks in my childhood.

Giám khảo

Do you still like going to parks now?

Thí sinh

No, still I don't like to go park because I have other works like studies and other family issues.

Giám khảo

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Thí sinh

Yes I I like to see more park in my city it's so beautiful look beautiful and also a greenery.

Giám khảo

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Thí sinh

No I don't like don't plan to go any park but sometime I go my near Home Park for jogging.

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Part 1

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Make the response natural and grammatically correct by answering directly, then add one specific supporting detail. Use a clear topic sentence and a short reason. Avoid redundant words like 'had to' and incorrect prepositions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often played on the swings and rode my bicycle there with friends, which made those afternoons very memorable.

Do you still like going to parks now?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer, then give one or two concise, specific reasons using linking words (for example 'because' or 'so'). Correct grammar: use 'go to parks' and 'work' or 'tasks', and avoid excessive repetition.

Ví dụ: Not really; I rarely go to parks now because I am busy with my studies and family responsibilities, so I usually exercise at home instead.

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence about whether you'd like more parks, then support it with specific reasons using linking words such as 'because' or 'because of'. Fix repetition and adjective usage (e.g., 'beautiful' used once) and use plural 'parks' and 'greenery' as an uncountable noun.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they add green spaces and improve air quality, and people can use them for walking and relaxation.

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly and then give a clear, specific plan or exception. Use correct verb forms and prepositions (e.g., 'I don't plan to go to any parks,' 'sometimes I go to the park near my home for jogging'). Keep it concise and avoid double negatives.

Ví dụ: I don't plan to visit any special parks in the future, but sometimes I go to the park near my home to jog and get fresh air.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I had to like to go in parks in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks in my childhood.

The original sentence mixes past constructions incorrectly ('had to like to go in parks'). Use simple past 'liked' to describe a habitual past action and the gerund 'going' after like. Also use 'to parks' not 'in parks' for movement/destination. Grammar problem type ID: 6

Present tense issue

× No, still I don't like to go park because I have other works like studies and other family issues.

✓ No, I still don't like going to parks because I have other work like studying and family responsibilities.

Use 'still' in natural position before the verb. Prefer gerund 'going' after 'like'. 'Park' should be plural 'parks' or use 'the park'; 'works' is incorrect for tasks—use 'work' or 'tasks'. 'Studies' as a noun should be 'studying' to indicate activity; 'family issues' better as 'family responsibilities'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

Article errors

× Yes I I like to see more park in my city it's so beautiful look beautiful and also a greenery.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city; they would look beautiful and add more greenery.

Use 'would like' to express desire. 'More park' should be 'more parks'. 'It's so beautiful look beautiful' is ungrammatical—restate as 'they would look beautiful'. 'A greenery' is incorrect; use 'more greenery' or 'greenery'. Also fix repeated 'I I' and punctuation. Grammar problem type ID: 22

Present tense issue

× No I don't like don't plan to go any park but sometime I go my near Home Park for jogging.

✓ No, I don't plan to go to any park, but sometimes I go to the nearby park by my home for jogging.

Remove the duplicated 'don't' and use 'don't plan' to express intention. Use 'to any park' for destination and plural 'sometimes'. 'My near Home Park' should be 'the nearby park by my home' or 'the park near my home'. Capitalization of 'Home' is unnecessary. Include preposition 'to' before park. Grammar problem type ID: 6

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