Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I like.
Giám khảo
Do you still like going to parks now?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I still like going to parks now because I like park.
Giám khảo
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Thí sinh
I don't know, uh, maybe I like.
Giám khảo
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Thí sinh
Maybe, uh, American Park, I want to go to future in the future.
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答要更完整且自然。先直接回应问题(用一个完整句子),然后给出一两句具体细节支持你的观点,例如描述你小时候在公园做什么或为什么喜欢。避免只有单词或碎片句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I used to play on the swings and have picnics with my family, which made those visits really fun and memorable.
Do you still like going to parks now?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 避免重复和语法错误。用一到两句清晰说明你现在是否喜欢,并给出具体原因或频率。使用连接词让表达更连贯,例如 because / so / and.
Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and get fresh air. I usually go once or twice a week to walk my dog and unwind.
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答要更明确并提供理由。不要模糊或犹豫。先给出明确立场(yes/no),然后说明原因或提出建议,例如城市需要更多绿地或目前已有足够。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide safe places for children to play. New small parks in residential areas would be especially helpful.
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答时要明确提到具体地点并解释原因。避免重复词(future in the future)和填充语(uh, maybe)。可以说明什么时候去或想在那里做什么。
Ví dụ: I would like to visit American Park in the future because I've heard it has beautiful gardens and cycling paths. I hope to go there next summer and spend a day exploring the trails.
× Yeah, I like.
✓ Yes, I did.
句子使用的是现在时“I like”,但问题“Did you like going to parks as a child?”是过去时,回答应使用过去时态。建议将动词改为过去时“did”或用短语“Yes, I did.”以与提问时态一致。
× Yeah, I still like going to parks now because I like park.
✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now because I like parks.
第一部分“still like”用于现在时,符合问题“Do you still like...?”,无需改为过去。但句子后半部分“because I like park”中“park”为可数名词,单数形式需冠词或改为复数。此处应使用复数“parks”来表示一般喜欢公园这一类地方,或写作“because I like the park”指特定公园。建议将“park”改为复数“parks”。
× I don't know, uh, maybe I like.
✓ I don't know, maybe I would.
问题“Would you like to see more parks in your city?”使用情态动词“would”询问意愿,回答中也应使用相应的情态结构。原句“maybe I like”语义和语法都不合适。可用“maybe I would”或更自然的“maybe, I would”/“maybe I would like to”来表达愿望。
× Maybe, uh, American Park, I want to go to future in the future.
✓ Maybe American Park. I want to go there in the future.
原句中“go to future in the future”结构错误且重复使用“future”。应使用动词短语“go there in the future”来表达将来的打算。另外“American Park, I want to go to”语序不自然,建议先说公园名,再用完整句子“I want to go there in the future.”