Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng cơ bản, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn. Ví dụ: sửa lỗi thì ("when I was more" -> "when I was younger"), dùng động từ phù hợp ("we often played"), tránh lặp và giữ dưới 5 câu. Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ở công viên cụ thể, tần suất, cảm xúc).

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my father to the local park, and we played badminton or basketball together almost every weekend. Those visits made me feel active and happy because we spent quality time outdoors.

Gợi ý: Sửa cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp, dùng linking words để mạch lạc (e.g., "Usually"/"Often"), chọn từ vựng chính xác ("I have a habit", "play outdoor sports", "bench"). Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu, nêu tần suất và hoạt động cụ thể. Tránh lỗi thì và giới từ.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually go every afternoon after school to play outdoor sports like football or to jog, and sometimes I just sit on a bench and watch the scenery. It helps me relax and clear my mind after studying.

Gợi ý: Cần làm rõ ý chính và sửa ngữ pháp/nghĩa trái ngược. Tránh nói lầm ý ("I don't want the government invest" mâu thuẫn). Nên nói trực tiếp: "Yes, I would like more parks" rồi nêu lý do cụ thể với linking words ("because", "for example"). Giữ 2-3 câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide open space for people to breathe fresh air and relax after a hard working day. For example, new parks could include playgrounds and walking paths that encourage families to exercise outdoors.

Gợi ý: Tránh ngập ngừng và câu dài lủng củng; trả lời trực tiếp rồi bổ sung chi tiết với linking words ("However", "Maybe"). Sửa cấu trúc ("I don't know much about parks"), dùng động từ chính xác ("look up information", "visit"). Giữ 2-3 câu, nêu một ví dụ cụ thể nếu có.

Ví dụ: Not really, I don't know many parks in my country or abroad. However, I might look up information about famous parks like Central Park in New York, and if I have the opportunity in the future I would like to visit one to see its gardens and walking trails.

× Actually, yes. When I was more, I used to go to the park with my father.

✓ Actually, yes. When I was younger, I used to go to the park with my father.

The phrase 'When I was more' is ungrammatical; the correct expression to indicate younger age is 'when I was younger'. Use 'used to' for past habitual actions, which is correct here. Suggestions: replace 'more' with 'younger' to convey age.

× We often play some sports like badminton or basketball.

✓ We often played sports like badminton or basketball.

The context refers to past habits, so the past tense 'played' should be used instead of present 'play'. Also, 'some sports' is unnecessary; use 'sports' or 'games'. Suggestions: use past simple 'played' for habitual actions in the past.

× Absolutely yes. Now I'm have a bit habit of going to the park, especially every afternoon after the school time I go to the park to place some outdoor sport or sometime I just sit on the Ben and watch the scenery.

✓ Absolutely yes. Now I have a habit of going to the park, especially every afternoon after school. I go to do some outdoor sports or sometimes I just sit on a bench and watch the scenery.

Multiple issues: 'I'm have' mixes present continuous and simple present; use 'I have' for possession/habit. 'a bit habit' is incorrect; say 'a habit' or 'a bit of a habit'. 'after the school time' should be 'after school'. 'to place some outdoor sport' is incorrect—use 'to do some outdoor sports'. 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Ben' is misspelled; correct is 'bench'. Suggestions: use simple present 'I have', 'a habit' or 'a bit of a habit', 'after school', 'do some outdoor sports', 'sometimes', and 'bench'.

× I would like to say yes, you know park will give people more space yet and dreams area to breathe the fresh air or relax after a hard working day and I don't want the government invest more park in my city to create.

✓ I would say yes. Parks give people more space and a peaceful area to breathe fresh air or relax after a hard day of work, and I want the government to invest in creating more parks in my city.

Problems include modal and verb forms: 'park will give' is acceptable but 'Parks give' is better general statement; 'dreams area' is incorrect—use 'peaceful area' or 'green space'. 'a hard working day' should be 'a hard day of work'. 'I don't want the government invest more park in my city to create' is incorrect word order and negation; intended meaning is positive desire: 'I want the government to invest in creating more parks'. Use 'to invest in creating' or 'to invest in parks'. Suggestions: use correct verb forms after 'want' ('want someone to do something'), use plural 'parks' for general statements, correct collocations like 'breathe fresh air' and 'a hard day of work'.

× Not really, you know, I don't know much about the park in my country and also another country, but umm, maybe after this examination I will umm serve for some information about another park and if I have an opportunity in the future I would like to.

✓ Not really. I don't know much about parks in my country or in other countries, but maybe after this exam I will search for information about other parks, and if I have the opportunity in the future I would like to visit them.

Errors: 'the park in my country and also another country' should be plural and parallel: 'parks in my country or in other countries'. 'after this examination' is okay but 'after this exam' is more natural. 'I will umm serve for some information' is incorrect—use 'search for information' or 'look for information'. 'if I have an opportunity' should be 'if I have the opportunity' and complete the idea: 'I would like to visit them.' Suggestions: use plural nouns for general reference, use 'search for' or 'look for' information, and complete the sentence with the intended action.