Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response grammatically correct, more concise, and use a clear topic sentence followed by one specific supporting detail. Use past tense consistently and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. For example, my friends and I often played football and climbed trees every afternoon, which made those times my favorite part of the week.

Gợi ý: Start with a full sentence answering the question directly, then give one clear specific example. Correct grammar (use past tense for past events) and simpler linking words like "for example" or "recently".

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, especially with family and friends. For example, recently a friend invited me to a birthday picnic in a local park and we spent the afternoon playing games and eating together.

Gợi ý: Answer directly then give a reason and a brief specific detail. Use linking words like "but" and "however" correctly and keep sentences natural and grammatically correct.

Ví dụ: Yes, although Sydney already has many parks, I would like to see more parks closer to my neighborhood. That way I could visit them more often for short walks and weekend picnics.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer naming the park, use correct verb forms and clearer reasons. Limit to two or three sentences and add one specific detail about what you want to do there.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Moorpark in the city. I want to compare its scenery with the parks near my home and try some hiking trails there because I enjoy short adventure trips.

× When I was a child I loved to go parks and play with my friends, but later on I get older I don't have much enough time to do it and so I realized it was not anymore my way of comfort.

✓ When I was a child I loved going to parks and playing with my friends, but later on when I got older I did not have enough time to do it, and so I realized it was no longer my way of comfort.

Use of verb + -ing (gerund) after 'loved' and for activities: 'loved going' and 'playing'. Also required past tense 'got' and 'did not' to match past time. 'No longer' is the correct phrase instead of 'not anymore'. Suggestions: use gerunds for activities after love/like and keep consistent past tense for past-time statements.

× Enjoy going to parks, especially with friends and family.

✓ I enjoy going to parks, especially with friends and family.

The sentence lacks the subject 'I' and uses the base verb 'Enjoy' which needs subject-verb agreement: 'I enjoy'. Suggestion: include subject and use correct present-tense verb for first person.

× My friend just actually invited me last time and we had a celebration of birthday so I really do enjoy about it.

✓ A friend actually invited me recently and we had a birthday celebration, so I really enjoyed it.

Word order and adverb choice were incorrect: 'just actually' and 'last time' are awkward; 'recently' fits better. 'Celebration of birthday' should be 'birthday celebration'. 'Enjoy about it' is ungrammatical; past event requires past tense 'enjoyed it'. Suggestions: use natural adverb placement and correct noun phrases and verb tense.

× Here in Sydney there are lots of parks that we could really see and I'm very thankful about it, but I would definitely want to explore more parks near my place.

✓ Here in Sydney there are lots of parks to see, and I'm very thankful for that, but I would definitely like to explore more parks near my home.

Pronoun and preposition use: 'thankful about it' should be 'thankful for that'. 'Could really see' is awkward; 'to see' or 'we can visit' is better. 'My place' is colloquial; 'my home' is clearer. Also 'would definitely want to' is less natural than 'would definitely like to'. Suggestions: use correct prepositions with 'thankful' and more natural verbs/phrases.

× There's a park near in the city, it's called Moorpark.

✓ There's a park in the city nearby; it's called Moorpark.

Redundant preposition 'near in' is incorrect. Use 'in the city nearby' or 'near the city'. Suggestions: remove redundant words and place 'nearby' or 'near' correctly.

× I really wanted to go in there and see what are the differences compared to the parts that closer to my place.

✓ I really want to go there and see what the differences are compared to the parks closer to my home.

Tense consistency: 'wanted' implies past but question asks about future; use 'want'. 'Go in there' is unnatural; 'go there'. Word order: 'see what the differences are'. 'Parts' should be 'parks' and 'that closer to my place' needs comparative 'closer to my home'. Suggestions: keep tense consistent with context, use correct noun, and proper word order for clauses.

× And also I'd like to grow more on adventure trip or hiking, that would sounds exciting.

✓ I'd also like to do more adventure trips or go hiking; that would sound exciting.

Incorrect verb phrase 'grow more on' should be 'do more' or 'go on more'. Use plural 'adventure trips' or 'go hiking'. 'That would sounds' has extra 's'—use 'sound' after modal 'would'. Suggestions: use correct collocations ('go hiking', 'adventure trips') and ensure verb form after modal is base form.