Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and check verb tenses and word forms (e.g., "we used to go," "we brought snacks"). Use linking words such as "for example" or "also" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, my friends and I would visit every weekend to get fresh air and play on the slides. We often brought snacks and spent hours chatting and running around.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and reduce hesitation. Give a clear topic sentence, then one specific detail; avoid filler words like "uh" and repeated phrases. Use correct verb forms and a finishing phrase so the answer sounds complete.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I often meet friends there to drink tea beneath a tree and have relaxed conversations, which helps me unwind after work.

Gợi ý: Make your opinion clear and use correct tense and sentence structure. Start with a direct answer (yes/no and why), then give one specific example. Avoid unclear phrases and finish sentences fully. Use linking words like "however" or "for example."

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve residents' well-being. For example, Tatala Park is very popular and well-lit, but I would like smaller neighborhood parks so more people can easily access nature.

Gợi ý: Be specific and concise. Begin with a clear statement of the place you want to visit, then give two concrete reasons using correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms (e.g., "cartoon-like" instead of "cartoonic").

Ví dụ: In the future I'd like to visit Disneyland because it has many cartoon-like attractions and shows. I also want to enjoy the rides, try different foods, and share the experience with my friends and family.

× Imagine what we used to go to parks like with my friends, we used to go there for enjoyment, like to gain some fresh air and we also bring something for it there.

✓ Imagine when we used to go to parks with my friends; we went there for enjoyment, to get some fresh air, and we also brought things to have there.

Multiple tense inconsistencies: 'used to' (past habitual) should be followed by past verbs ('went', 'brought'). 'Bring' is present tense and conflicts with past context. Also 'gain some fresh air' is unnatural; 'get some fresh air' is preferred. Use past simple for actions in the past and keep parallel structure. Suggestion: Keep the past tense consistently by using 'used to' with past verbs and use natural collocations like 'get some fresh air'.

× And other than that, there were many slides we enjoy a lot there.

✓ Other than that, there were many slides we enjoyed a lot there.

The sentence shifts between past ('were') and present ('enjoy'). Maintain past tense consistency: 'enjoyed' matches 'were'. Also word order improved by placing 'there' at the end. Suggestion: Use consistent tense across clauses and place verbs correctly.

× Yes, most certainly I love to go to parks with my friends to get some fresh air there and to have uh, gossips with my friends.

✓ Yes, I certainly love going to parks with my friends to get some fresh air and to gossip with them.

Redundant 'most certainly' and awkward 'have gossips'. Use gerund 'going' for general preferences and 'gossip' as an uncountable verb, not 'gossips'. Also avoid repeating 'with my friends' twice; use pronoun 'them'. Suggestion: Use concise expressions and correct verb forms for routines and preferences.

× Like we sit there beside a tree and taking some tea and talking to each other by the.

✓ We sit beside a tree, have some tea, and talk to each other there.

Mixed forms: 'sit' (present) combined with 'taking' (present participle) is inconsistent for habitual actions; use parallel base verbs or gerunds consistently. 'Taking some tea' is unnatural; 'have some tea' is preferred. The sentence ended with 'by the.' which is incomplete; replace with 'there'. Suggestion: Use parallel structure for coordinated verbs and complete the location phrase.

× To be entirely honest, I would love to go to parks in my city even though I will visited most of the parks in my city where other than there.

✓ To be entirely honest, I would love to visit parks in my city, even though I have visited most of them already.

Incorrect tense 'will visited' is wrong; use present perfect 'have visited' to indicate experience up to now. 'Go to parks' can be better phrased as 'visit parks'. The clause 'where other than there' is unclear and ungrammatical; simplify to 'most of them already.' Suggestion: Use present perfect for experiences and choose clear phrasing.

× One of the best park in our city is Tatala park.

✓ One of the best parks in our city is Tatala Park.

Article and noun number: 'One of the best park' should be 'one of the best parks' because 'one of the' requires a plural noun. Also capitalize proper noun 'Tatala Park'. Suggestion: Use plural after 'one of the' and capitalize park names.

× I will visit there it's a very big part with most lights and.

✓ I visit it often; it's a very big park with many lights.

Mixed future 'I will visit there' and an unfinished clause. If speaker means habitual visits, use present simple 'I visit it often' or 'I have visited it'; also 'part' is typo for 'park'. 'Most lights' is unclear; 'many lights' communicates the idea. Suggestion: Use correct noun 'park', choose appropriate tense, and complete the idea.

× In my future I would love to go to Disneyland, like there are many cartoonic things there and other than that there are many things to do like eating, like eating and talking to people's and enjoying with my friends and sometimes I'll bring my family.

✓ In the future, I would love to go to Disneyland. There are many cartoonish attractions, and there are many things to do, such as eating, talking to people, and enjoying time with my friends; sometimes I'll bring my family.

Phrase 'In my future' should be 'In the future'. 'Cartoonic' is not a standard adjective; 'cartoonish' or 'cartoon-themed attractions' is better. 'Talking to people's' is incorrect plural possessive; use 'talking to people'. 'Enjoying with my friends' should be 'enjoying time with my friends'. The long run-on sentence should be split for clarity. Suggestion: Use correct adjectives, plural nouns without apostrophe, and clearer sentence boundaries.