Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer grammatical, concise and more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details (what activities you did and with whom). Use correct verb tenses and linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my parents and friends, where we played games, had picnics and explored the playgrounds. Because the parks were spacious and green, they became our favorite weekend destinations.

Gợi ý: Be precise and correct place names and grammar; avoid repetition. Begin with a direct answer, then add specific routine details and a reason using a linking word (for example, 'because' or 'so').

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I now live in an apartment in the city center, and there is a lovely park nearby, so I often take a walk there after dinner to relax and enjoy the scenery.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give one clear reason with specific examples. Correct grammar (singular/plural, articles) and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example.' Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are many vacant lots that could become useful public spaces. For example, new modern playgrounds for children and quiet traditional gardens for adults would improve residents' well-being.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and a clear, specific reason. Fix grammar and avoid repetition. Mention one or two concrete examples of what you want to experience in those parks and link your reason to your background briefly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit traditional parks in the future. Because I study landscape architecture, I am especially interested in experiencing historic gardens and natural landscapes to study layout, native plants and traditional design techniques.

× I really going to parks when I was a child.

✓ I really enjoyed going to parks when I was a child.

The original lacks a main verb and misuses the -ing form alone. In past tense narratives you need a past-tense auxiliary or main verb plus the -ing form (e.g., enjoyed going). Use 'enjoyed going' to show past habitual action.

× I always going to park with my friends and my parents.

✓ I always went to the park with my friends and my parents.

The sentence uses the -ing form without an auxiliary and also has article issues. For past habitual actions use past tense 'went'. Add the definite article 'the' before 'park' when referring to a specific park you visited regularly.

× We always have some entertainment in some beautiful park.

✓ We always had some activities in a beautiful park.

The context is past (childhood), so use past tense 'had'. 'Some entertainment in some beautiful park' is awkward; replace with 'activities in a beautiful park' for natural collocation and remove the redundant 'some' before 'beautiful park'.

× Yes, absolutely. I like going to Prague.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I like going to parks in Prague.

The original 'I like going to Prague' is grammatical but probably deviates from the topic (parks). If the intended meaning is visiting parks in Prague, specify 'parks in Prague'. No tense change required.

× Now I live in apartments which located in the center of city.

✓ Now I live in an apartment that is located in the center of the city.

The original lacks the verb 'is' and has article errors. Use singular or plural consistently: 'an apartment' or 'apartments'. Add the relative clause verb 'is located' and include the definite article 'the' before 'center of the city'.

× Near my apartment there is a beautiful park with beautiful scenery.

✓ Near my apartment, there is a beautiful park with lovely scenery.

This sentence is mostly correct but benefits from a comma after the introductory phrase and style improvement: change repeated 'beautiful' to 'lovely' to avoid repetition.

× I always have a walk there after dinner.

✓ I always take a walk there after dinner.

Native speakers typically use 'take a walk' rather than 'have a walk'. The present simple 'always take' is appropriate for habitual current action.

× Yes, I'd like to see more park in my city because my my city have many vacant spaces.

✓ Yes, I'd like to see more parks in my city because my city has many vacant spaces.

Use plural 'parks' when talking about more than one. Also fix subject-verb agreement: 'my city has' (singular subject requires 'has'). Remove duplicate 'my'.

× I think we need a lot of public spaces in my city such as some modern parks or traditional parks.

✓ I think we need more public spaces in my city, such as modern parks or traditional parks.

'A lot of' is acceptable but 'more public spaces' matches the context better (requesting additional parks). Remove redundant 'some' and add a comma before 'such as'.

× It can provide a lot of spaces to children and adult.

✓ They can provide a lot of space for children and adults.

Use plural subject 'parks' (they) to match earlier plural reference or reword. 'Space' (uncountable) is more natural than 'spaces' and use 'for children and adults' with plural 'adults'.

× I really want to go to some traditional parks because I major in landscape architecture, so I really like feel some natural surroundings and some traditional parks I like to touch natural.

✓ I really want to visit some traditional parks because I am majoring in landscape architecture, so I really like to experience natural surroundings and to connect with nature in traditional parks.

Multiple issues: tense and verb form -- use present continuous 'am majoring' or 'major in' with rephrasing; use 'visit' instead of 'go to' for variety; 'like feel' is incorrect — use 'like to experience' or 'enjoy experiencing'; 'touch natural' is ungrammatical — use 'connect with nature'. Combine into a clearer, grammatical sentence.