Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural by using past tense consistently and adding one specific memory or detail. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and avoid repetitive phrases like "used to" twice. Use a clear topic sentence then a brief supporting detail with a linking word.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. My parents often took me to a large park near our home, where I remember running through wide lawns and feeding ducks by the pond, which made those visits very special.

Gợi ý: Be more direct and natural: use clear, simple sentences and avoid awkward phrases like "reduced to negligible." Provide a reason or frequency and one specific activity you do there. Use a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I still enjoy going to parks, although I go much less often now because of work. However, when I do visit, I usually walk or have a picnic with friends to relax and catch up.

Gợi ý: Avoid hesitations and unclear phrasing. State your opinion clearly, then give a concise reason and a specific example of a nearby park. Keep sentences grammatically correct and coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like more parks in the city because they improve air quality and provide places to relax. For example, there is a small community park next to my building that many residents use for morning walks and children's play.

Gợi ý: Make the sentence structure smoother and more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a reason and a specific activity you would do there. Avoid repeating excitement and ensure tense consistency.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have always wanted to visit Hyde Park in London. I hope to go there with my family to stroll by the Serpentine, have a picnic, and enjoy the open spaces and historic sights.

× Yes, I love going to parks.

✓ Yes, I loved going to parks.

The question asked about childhood (past). The student answered with present tense 'love', which is inconsistent. Use past tense 'loved' to match the time frame: 'When I was a child'. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time reference in the question.

× When I was a child, my parents used to take me to various parks in my hometown and they were usually very big and full of greenery.

✓ When I was a child, my parents used to take me to various parks in my hometown, and they were usually very big and full of greenery.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'and' joining two independent clauses. Also 'used to take' correctly indicates habitual past. Suggestion: add the comma for correct sentence joining.

× I don't dislike going to parks now, but the moments that I have been to the park have reduced to negligible.

✓ I don't dislike going to parks now, but the times I have visited parks have become negligible.

The phrase 'moments that I have been to the park have reduced to negligible' is unidiomatic. 'Have been to' is present perfect and can be used, but 'moments' is not the best noun; 'times' or 'visits' fits better. 'Reduced to negligible' should be 'have become negligible'. Suggestion: use 'times/visits I have had' or 'the number of times I visit' and 'have become negligible' for clarity.

× But whenever I visit a park, I just make sure that I have a great time over there with whoever.

✓ But whenever I visit a park, I just make sure that I have a great time there with whoever is with me.

'Over there' is redundant; 'there' is sufficient. 'With whoever' is incomplete; it needs a clause to clarify who ('whoever is with me' or 'whoever I am with'). Suggestion: use 'there' and complete the phrase 'whoever is with me'.

× I would love to see more parks in my city.

✓ I would love to see more parks in my city.

This sentence is grammatically correct and appropriately expresses preference about the future; no change needed.

× I have heard there are many beautiful parks, uh, in my locality and one is itself in my building and that is one of the most loved place or the park you would say I go every.

✓ I have heard there are many beautiful parks in my locality; one is even in my building, and it is one of the most loved places. I go there often.

Original has several issues: 'itself' is unnatural here (use 'even'), 'one of the most loved place' should be plural 'places', and the clause 'or the park you would say I go every' is incomplete and ungrammatical. Also split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: replace awkward words, use plural 'places', and finish the idea with 'I go there often'.

× Yes, I would love to go to one of the specific parks that I have been wanting to go since I was a child and it is the Hyde Park in London and I am very much excited to go there and I would have a wonderful time with my family.

✓ Yes, I would love to go to a specific park that I have wanted to visit since I was a child: Hyde Park in London. I am very excited to go there and I would have a wonderful time with my family.

Several issues: 'one of the specific parks that I have been wanting to go since' is wordy and ungrammatical. Use 'a specific park' or 'one specific park' and 'have wanted to visit since' (omit 'to go'). 'the Hyde Park' is incorrect; proper name 'Hyde Park' does not need 'the'. Also split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: use 'have wanted to visit since' and remove the definite article before the park name.