Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do.

Giám khảo

Do you still like going to parks now?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course I I usually go to the park.

Giám khảo

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Thí sinh

Uh, of course I think, uh different park have different salary and can uh, can give, give me different moods.

Giám khảo

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Thí sinh

Yes.

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Part 1

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答太简短且时态不一致。应直接用过去时并扩展一句或两句细节,说明原因或回忆具体活动,使用连接词使回答自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I loved going to parks as a child because I could play on the swings and have picnics with my family. Those visits were my favorite weekend activity.

Do you still like going to parks now?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 重复词汇且语法不够准确。用现在时说明频率,并给出具体时间或原因,最多保持五句,使用连接词如 'because' 或 'so'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually visit a nearby park two or three times a week because I like jogging there and relaxing in the fresh air.

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 表达混乱且有词汇错误(如 'salary' 用错)。需要清晰陈述观点并提供具体理由,避免填充词(uh, um)。用连词组织句子并用准确词汇如 'style' 或 'atmosphere'。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. Different parks have different atmospheres and designs, so having more parks would give people a variety of places to relax and enjoy nature.

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且没有细节。应说明想去的具体公园或类型,给出原因或时间计划,使用连接词丰富内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to visit the new botanical garden that is opening next year because I’m interested in seeing its rare plants and taking photographs there.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

学生回答第一题时,问题是过去时态(Did you like...)。回答应使用过去时,因此将“I do”改为“I did”。建议:在回答过去时的问题时,用过去时动词(如 did, liked)。

Present tense issue

× Yes, of course I I usually go to the park.

✓ Yes, of course. I usually go to the park.

考官问题是现在时(Do you still like...),回答需用现在时。句子中有重复“I I”,为口误。将句子分成两部分并去掉重复词,保持现在时态(usually 表示习惯性现在)。建议:回答时注意去掉重复词,保持主谓一致并使用正确时态。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Uh, of course I think, uh different park have different salary and can uh, can give, give me different moods.

✓ Uh, of course. I think different parks have different characteristics and can give me different moods.

原句有多处错误:1) 单复数错误(park 应为 parks,与 different 搭配且对应 have);2) 用词错误(salary 不适合此处,应该用 characteristics 或 features);3) 句子结构混乱且有重复词。根据语境应使用现在时表一般事实,用复数 parks 和动词 have(主谓一致)。建议:注意名词单复数,选择语义合适的词(salary 表示薪水,不用于描述公园),并简化句子去掉重复语词。

Sentence structure errors

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I would like to go to some new parks in the future.

考官问的是未来愿望(Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?),单独回答“Yes”太简略且不明确。应使用表示将来或愿望的结构(would like to / want to),并给出具体信息。建议:在回答类似未来意愿的问题时,用完整句并用适当的将来表达(will / would like / want to)。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Different— Dissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
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