Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more direct and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details. Use linking words (for example, however) and correct verb forms and articles.

Ví dụ: Not really. As a child I preferred spending time in coffee houses and small shopping arcades with friends. For example, we often met at a café near my school rather than going to parks, and I also enjoyed visiting zoos more than open green spaces.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and fluency: use present simple correctly and avoid repetition. Begin with a direct statement, then give specific reasons and use linking words like because or so.

Ví dụ: Not really. I only go to parks in the early morning to walk or do light exercise because they are quieter then and the air is fresh.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer to be clear and concise. Start with a direct response, then give a specific reason and an estimate if needed. Avoid hesitation and unclear phrases; use correct sentence structure and numbers.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think we need many more. My city already has many parks—almost every neighborhood has at least one. For example, I would estimate there are over a hundred parks across the city, so adding more is not a priority for me.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clarify your meaning. Use correct expressions (theme park, Disneyland) and explain why you want to go there with one or two specific reasons.

Ví dụ: Not really to a public park, but I would like to visit Disneyland in the future. It is more of a theme park, and I want to go because it offers attractions and shows that I can't find in ordinary parks.

× Actually no, I like to spend my time in the coffee houses or side malls or a little bit with the friends.

✓ Actually no, I liked to spend my time in coffeehouses or side malls or a little bit with friends.

The question asks about childhood (past), so the verb should be in the past tense. Use 'liked' instead of 'like'. Also use 'coffeehouses' as one word or 'coffee houses'; 'the friends' is incorrect when speaking generally—use 'friends' without the article.

× Maybe I would like go for zoos more than parks.

✓ Maybe I would have liked to go to zoos more than parks.

After 'would like' when referring to past preference, use 'have liked to' or rephrase; alternatively, use simple past 'I preferred'. Also the correct preposition is 'to' for visiting places: 'go to zoos'. 'Go for zoos' is incorrect.

× Not very much actually, but I usually go for the parks in the morning, early morning when I want to walk a little bit and doing a small amount of sport.

✓ Not very much actually, but I usually go to parks in the early morning when I want to walk a little bit and do a small amount of exercise.

Use 'go to' not 'go for' when visiting places. 'Parks' should be plural without 'the' when speaking generally. 'Early morning' is better expressed as 'in the early morning'. Parallel verb forms: use 'walk' and 'do' (base form) rather than 'doing'. 'Sport' as an uncountable noun is better replaced with 'exercise' here.

× Do we want us? There's a lot of parks in my city, and you cannot imagine that in each area they have more than one park.

✓ Do we want more? There are a lot of parks in my city, and you cannot imagine that in each area they have more than one park.

Sentence 'Do we want us?' is unclear and uses pronouns incorrectly. Likely intended 'Do we want more?' Also use 'There are' for plural 'parks' (existence) instead of contraction 'There's' which is singular. The rest is acceptable.

× And like the minimum, I think parks in a man, it's like 100 because in each neighborhood you, you and you should see a park.

✓ At a minimum, I think there are about 100 parks because in each neighborhood you can see a park.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'At a minimum' and 'there are about 100 parks'. Remove 'parks in a man' which is nonsensical. Simplify 'you, you and you should see a park' to 'you can see a park' for clarity and correct structure.

× But I don't like them very much.

✓ But I didn't like them very much.

If referring to childhood preference, keep past tense 'didn't like'. If referring to current feelings, original 'don't like' could be correct; given previous context about childhood, use past tense.

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you would like to go to in the future?

For polite future preferences use 'would like' rather than 'want' in this question context. The original is acceptable but 'would like' is more natural.

× I don't think that it's like a park, but I would like to go for Disney.

✓ I don't think that it's really a park, but I would like to go to Disney.

Use 'go to' for visiting places. 'Like' used as filler is unnecessary; 'really' clarifies doubt. 'Go for Disney' is incorrect.

× I don't know if they consider it as a park or no.

✓ I don't know if they consider it a park or not.

Use 'if they consider it a park' (no 'as') and 'or not' instead of 'or no'. This corrects conjunction/phrase usage and makes the sentence natural.