Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and accurate: begin with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (past tense), and avoid fillers. Give one or two specific supporting details with correct verbs and vocabulary. Use linking words like 'because' or 'and' correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because the surroundings were peaceful and the air was fresh. For example, my parents often took me to a riverside park where I liked feeding birds and playing on the swings.

Gợi ý: Use correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary. Start with a direct answer, then give one specific recent example using linking words (e.g., 'Recently,' 'For example'). Avoid repetition and filler sounds.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax. Recently, for example, I visited Godavari Park with my family for a picnic, and we spent the afternoon walking in the gardens and playing games.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use precise reasons with correct nouns and verbs. Use linking phrases like 'because' and 'so' properly, and give one clear specific detail (when/how often) rather than repeating ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I often visit parks on weekends to relax. For instance, having more small neighborhood parks would make it easier for me to go for a morning walk without traveling far.

Gợi ý: Use correct grammar for count (several parks) and clearer organization: state a direct answer, name one park and give specific reasons with linking words. Avoid trailing off and finish sentences fully.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several parks I would like to visit, but Godavari Park is one of my favourites. I want to return because it has lovely gardens, open lawns, and a riverside promenade where I can relax and take photographs.

× Yes, I used to like going to parks when I was child because the environment is very peaceful and very fresh.

✓ Yes, I used to like going to parks when I was a child because the environment was very peaceful and fresh.

Missing article 'a' before 'child' and inconsistent tense: 'used to' refers to past habitual so the rest of the clause should use past 'was' to match. Also 'very fresh' is acceptable but 'and fresh' is sufficient. Suggestion: include 'a' and use past tense for descriptions of past habitual situations.

× Last year I visit park with my parents, uh, because it makes me freeze, so I love it going to parks.

✓ Last year I visited a park with my parents because it made me feel refreshed, so I loved going to parks.

The sentence describes a past event so the verb should be in past tense: 'visit' -> 'visited'. 'park' needs an article 'a park'. 'makes me freeze' is incorrect idiomatically; use 'made me feel refreshed' or 'made me feel cool'. 'I love it going to parks' is ungrammatical; change to 'I loved going to parks' to match past perspective.

× Yes, I still like going to park because going park makes me very, uh, relax and phrase.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks because going to the park makes me very relaxed and peaceful.

Count noun 'park' needs plural or article: use 'parks' or 'the park'. 'going park' needs 'going to the park'. 'relax' should be adjective 'relaxed'. 'phrase' appears to be a wrong word; likely 'peaceful'. Use correct adjectives and prepositions.

× So, uh, recently I visited, uh Godavari park, which is very beautiful park.

✓ So, recently I visited Godavari Park, which is a very beautiful park.

When naming the park, capitalization helps: 'Godavari Park'. 'which is very beautiful park' needs the indefinite article 'a' before 'very beautiful park'. 'Recently' plus past tense 'visited' is correct.

× Uh, we, we went there for picnic and we really enjoy.

✓ We went there for a picnic and we really enjoyed it.

Past event requires past tense 'enjoyed' not 'enjoy'. 'for picnic' needs article 'for a picnic'. Add pronoun 'it' to complete 'enjoyed it'.

× So I like it very.

✓ So I liked it a lot.

The original is ungrammatical and incomplete. Use past tense 'liked' to match prior context and replace vague 'very' with 'a lot' for idiomatic expression.

× Yes, I really like to see more bar in my city because as I mentioned earlier, I really enjoy going to park so I often go to park to enjoy it gives me fees and relax so I really enjoy going back I often go to park on my weekends so I really.

✓ Yes, I would really like to see more parks in my city because, as I mentioned earlier, I really enjoy going to parks. I often go to parks to relax because they make me feel refreshed, and I usually go on weekends.

Multiple issues: 'bar' is likely mispronounced for 'parks' so use plural 'parks'. Use plural 'parks' or 'the park' consistently. 'going to park' requires 'going to parks' or 'going to the park'. 'gives me fees' is incorrect; likely 'makes me feel refreshed'. Sentence was run-on; break into clearer sentences and use correct verb forms and plural nouns.

× Yes, there is several park I want to visit but Godavari park is my one of my favorite parks so I really want to visit here because this park has different beautiful things like gardens, ground, everything is beautiful and.

✓ Yes, there are several parks I want to visit, but Godavari Park is one of my favorite parks, so I really want to visit it because this park has many beautiful things like gardens and a playground; everything is beautiful.

Use 'there are' not 'there is' with plural 'several parks'. 'park' should be plural. 'my one of my favorite' is redundant; use 'one of my favorite'. 'visit here' -> 'visit it' or 'visit there'. 'ground' is awkward; 'playground' or 'open ground' is clearer. Remove trailing 'and' and complete the sentence. Use commas to separate clauses.