Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer grammatically correct, more coherent, and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two brief supporting details. Use correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary (e.g., ‘used to go’, ‘relaxing’, ‘play’). Avoid repetition and unnecessary words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I used to go there every weekend because it was relaxing and I could play games with my friends among the trees.

Gợi ý: Provide a concise, grammatical response that directly answers the question and gives specific reasons. Use linking words like ‘because’ and keep sentences short. Replace unclear phrases (e.g., ‘roll up here’, ‘working around the trees’) with precise verbs like ‘visit’, ‘walk’, or ‘exercise’.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy visiting parks. I often walk there during the day because it helps me relax and feel more confident, and I like exercising among the trees.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and explain clearly why more parks are beneficial. Use accurate phrases such as ‘benefit the environment’ and ‘improve residents’ wellbeing’. Avoid grammatical errors and vague references like ‘deserve government’.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I would like to see more parks because they benefit the environment and improve residents’ wellbeing by providing green space and fresh air.

Gợi ý: Give a specific park or type of park and explain why you want to visit it. Keep hesitation to a minimum and use clear phrases like ‘I would like to visit…’ and reasons such as ‘for relaxation’, ‘for scenery’, or ‘for events’.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the new riverside park next summer because it has large grassy areas and beautiful views, and I think it will be a peaceful place to relax.

× When I was a child I usually going to the box because it's very relaxed for me and I can more activate there.

✓ When I was a child I usually went to the park because it was very relaxing for me and I could be more active there.

The original contains incorrect verb form 'usually going' where a past tense simple is required ('usually went') for habitual actions in the past (Grammar Problem Type 8 and 5). 'Box' is likely a wrong noun; 'park' fits the context. 'It's very relaxed' should be 'it was very relaxing' to describe a feeling in the past. 'I can more activate' is ungrammatical; use 'I could be more active' to express ability in the past. Suggestion: Use past simple for habitual past actions, use 'relaxing' as an adjective formed from a verb + -ing, and use 'active' as the adjective with appropriate auxiliary 'could'.

× I can go by going the parks and go by around the trees.

✓ I could walk through the parks and go around the trees.

The sentence mixes forms and prepositions incorrectly. 'Can go by going the parks' is ungrammatical; use a past ability 'could' consistent with 'When I was a child' and 'walk through the parks' is a natural verb + preposition. 'Go by around the trees' should be 'go around the trees.' Use correct verb choice and prepositions. Suggestion: Choose appropriate verbs ('walk') and prepositions ('through', 'around') and keep consistent tense with surrounding sentences.

× Yes, now I'm roll up here.

✓ Yes, now I'm living here.

'I'm roll up here' is ungrammatical. The speaker likely means 'I'm living here' or 'I've moved here'. Use present continuous 'I'm living' to describe a current situation. 'Roll up' is incorrect verb choice. Suggestion: Use accurate verbs for current states (live, work, study) with present continuous if describing ongoing situation.

× I'm still like going the parks because along the day it's help me more relax and more confident, more comfortable and I enjoy working around the trees.

✓ I still like going to the parks because during the day it helps me relax and feel more confident and comfortable, and I enjoy walking among the trees.

Multiple issues: 'still like going the parks' needs preposition 'to' ('going to the parks') (Grammar Problem Type 11). 'Along the day' should be 'during the day' (preposition). 'it's help me' should be 'it helps me' (subject-verb agreement and present tense). 'more relax and more confident' should be 'relax and feel more confident' (adjective use). 'working around the trees' is wrong verb; 'walking among the trees' is natural. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions ('to', 'during'), correct verb agreement ('it helps'), and appropriate verbs/adjectives ('feel more confident', 'walking among').

× Yes, definitely. I want to see more parks in your city because it very deserve government and environments and it helps my city very comfortable and refreshed every day.

✓ Yes, definitely. I want to see more parks in my city because the government should invest in the environment, and they make my city more comfortable and refreshed every day.

Problems include wrong pronoun 'your city' (should be 'my city' when speaking about own city) (Grammar Problem Type 12), missing article and verb form 'it very deserve government and environments' is ungrammatical. Use modal 'should' to express recommendation ('the government should invest in the environment'). 'It helps my city very comfortable' is incorrect: use 'they make my city more comfortable' or 'they help make my city more comfortable.' Suggestion: Use correct pronouns (my/your), use modal verbs like 'should' to recommend actions, include necessary verbs ('invest') and correct agreement ('parks...they make').

× MMM yes I am. Hmm I want to go to in the past grass where it gives me green space and more deserve umm government.

✓ Yes. I want to go to the park with grass in the future because it gives me green space and should be better supported by the government.

The original is confused: 'go to in the past grass' is ungrammatical and mixes tenses. 'More deserve umm government' is unclear; likely means 'should be better supported by the government.' Use future intention 'I want to go' and clarify noun phrase 'the park with grass.' Suggestion: Organize sentence clearly: state the place ('the park with grass'), the reason ('it gives me green space') and the recommendation using modal 'should' for government support.