Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more accurate with grammar, avoid repetition, and organize the answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details. Use correct verb tenses and plural/singular forms, and limit to 3–4 concise sentences. Add one or two concrete examples (when, who, what) and use linking words like “for example” or “also.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks with my grandfather when I was a child. For example, we often played badminton together and I also played games with my friends after school. I still cherish those days because they were relaxed and full of fun.

Gợi ý: Clarify meaning and correct grammar and word order. Avoid contradicting statements (saying you prefer it but cannot visit). Use present simple for habits and future tense correctly for plans. Keep it concise and add a specific example of when/how you use the park to relax.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, especially when I feel stressed from a busy schedule. For instance, after studying for exams I like to take a 30-minute walk in the nearest park to clear my mind. If my exams are over, I plan to visit the park more often.

Gợi ý: Structure the response with a clear topic sentence and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to connect points, and include a specific benefit or comparison to strengthen your answer. Use more natural phrasing (e.g., “important” instead of “crucial part of everyone's life”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green spaces for relaxation and recreation. For example, parks offer trees and walking paths where people can exercise, meet friends, or relax after work. In my view, more parks would improve residents’ mental and physical well-being.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and avoid unclear phrasing. Instead of saying you are not thinking about the future, state your current preference clearly and provide a reason and a brief example. Correct grammar (double words, verb forms) and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Not really — I usually visit the park near my house, so I don't plan to travel to distant parks. I prefer nearby green spaces because they are convenient and save time. In the future, I might visit famous parks when I travel, but for daily walks I stick to the local park.

× I used to visit park with my grandfather as I did.

✓ I used to visit the park with my grandfather.

The sentence incorrectly includes 'as I did' which is unnecessary and awkward. Also 'park' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific park the speaker visited. Use simple past habitual 'used to' plus the base verb. Remove redundant phrase to make the sentence clear.

× I used to do so many activities there such as playing badminton and sometime I plays played with my friends as I still cherish that days.

✓ I used to do many activities there, such as playing badminton, and sometimes I would play with my friends; I still cherish those days.

Multiple issues: 'so many' is informal but acceptable; 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency). 'plays' is wrong form; 'played' alone is fine but 'would play' expresses habitual past. 'that days' should be 'those days' because 'days' is plural and requires the demonstrative 'those'. Punctuation is added to clarify clauses.

× Yes I do, I love to do go parks whenever I feel stressful because of my hectic schedule.

✓ Yes, I do. I love to go to parks whenever I feel stressed because of my hectic schedule.

'love to do go parks' is ungrammatical; use 'love to go to parks' or 'love going to parks'. 'feel stressful' is incorrect; the person feels stressed (adjective). Added punctuation and preposition 'to' before 'parks'.

× I still prefer to go park as I am very busy nowadays so I cannot visit park.

✓ I still prefer to go to the park, but I am very busy nowadays so I cannot visit the park.

'go park' and 'visit park' lack the preposition 'to' and the definite article 'the' for a specific or habitual park. Also 'as' is improved to 'but' to show contrast. Use 'the park' when referring to the nearby or habitual park.

× But whenever when I will get free from my exams, I would definitely go for a walk in the park.

✓ But whenever I get free from my exams, I will definitely go for a walk in the park.

In time clauses starting with 'whenever', use present tense rather than 'will'. Also 'would' is inconsistent with the future intention; use 'will' for a definite future action. Removed redundant 'when'.

× Yes, definitely parks are the crucial part of everyone's life.

✓ Yes, definitely, parks are a crucial part of everyone's life.

'the crucial part' wrongly uses the definite article 'the' and singular 'part' with plural 'parks'. Use 'a crucial part' to express one of several important elements. Commas improve flow.

× As people can spend their leisure time in the parks, they can explore trees and lush greenery that makes the parks more lively in atmosphere.

✓ People can spend their leisure time in parks and explore the trees and lush greenery, which makes the parks more lively and pleasant.

Starting with 'As' is acceptable but here simpler coordination is clearer. 'the parks' is inconsistent; use 'parks' or 'the parks' consistently. 'that makes' refers to plural 'trees and lush greenery' so use 'which makes' referring to that whole idea. 'in atmosphere' is awkward; use 'more lively and pleasant'.

× So it is very good way to just unwind from daily stress visiting parks.

✓ So visiting parks is a very good way to unwind from daily stress.

Word order is awkward. Use the gerund phrase 'visiting parks' as the subject, followed by 'is a very good way to unwind'. Insert article 'a'.

× So parks are very important.

✓ So, parks are very important.

Minor punctuation only. The original sentence is grammatically correct; added comma for natural pause. No tense or agreement change needed.

× No, I am not thinking about my future as I will go for any park because I usually visit the park that is nearby my house and I do not go too much far from my house just for visiting parks.

✓ No, I am not thinking about future visits to any particular park because I usually visit the park that is near my house, and I do not go far from home just to visit parks.

'I am not thinking about my future as I will go for any park' is unclear. Use 'thinking about future visits to any particular park'. 'nearby my house' should be 'near my house'. 'do not go too much far' is ungrammatical; use 'do not go far'. 'just for visiting parks' -> 'just to visit parks'.

× Apart from this, there are other so many places that that I would like to visit in my future.

✓ Apart from this, there are many other places that I would like to visit in the future.

'there are other so many places' is ungrammatical; use 'many other places'. Duplicate 'that that' should be 'that'. 'in my future' is better as 'in the future'.