Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and use past tense consistently. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I often played on the swings and climbed trees, which gave me freedom and lots of exercise. Because of this, I have fond memories of spending afternoons outdoors.

Gợi ý: Clarify vocabulary (pub vs park) and avoid hesitations. Answer directly, use linking words to explain reasons, and provide one clear specific detail about what you enjoy now.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I visit them to relax and reduce stress because the greenery and flowers are calming, and I often sit on a bench to read or watch people walk by.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion sentence and support it with specific, logical reasons using linking words. Avoid vague philosophical phrases and repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide free recreational space for families. For instance, more parks would give children safe places to play and help residents relax without spending money.

Gợi ý: Be clear and concise: state whether you have a specific park in mind, then give one or two concrete reasons. Use present tense and avoid filler words.

Ví dụ: I don't have a particular new park in mind; I prefer the one near my home. It is beautiful and convenient, and my friends and I often meet there because it has play areas and pleasant gardens.

× Oh, as a child I like to go to park because it makes me feel happier and I can enjoy my time there when I was a young child and can play freely and do more physical movement.

✓ Oh, as a child I liked going to the park because it made me feel happier and I could enjoy my time there, play freely, and be more physically active.

The speaker mixes present and past tense. The context 'as a child' requires past tense (liked, made, could). Also 'go to park' needs the article 'the park' and 'do more physical movement' is unnatural; use 'be more physically active.' Use consistent past tense and natural collocations. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× That makes me feel more happier I guess.

✓ That made me feel happier, I guess.

'More happier' is incorrect because 'happier' already is the comparative form; adding 'more' is redundant. Also tense should be past 'made' to match 'as a child'. Grammar problem type ID: 25

× Yeah, actually I still like to go to the pub because that makes me feel less stressed, because it gives me happiness and I can't see the natural views there.

✓ Yeah, actually I still like to go to the park because it makes me feel less stressed, gives me happiness, and I can see the natural views there.

The student used 'pub' but context suggests 'park'; if 'park' is intended, correct it. Use present simple consistently for current habits ('still like', 'makes', 'gives', 'can see'). Also 'can't see' contradicts intention, so change to 'can see.' Grammar problem type ID: 6

× And flowers, green area that makes your eyes bloomed.

✓ And the flowers and green areas make your eyes feel refreshed.

'Makes your eyes bloomed' is ungrammatical: 'bloomed' is wrong form and metaphor. Use plural agreement 'make' for compound subject and a natural expression like 'feel refreshed.' Also include articles if needed. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× Yeah, I, I, I still like going there.

✓ Yes, I still like going there.

Reduce filler 'I, I, I' to a single 'I'. Use present simple 'like' to state current preference. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Yeah, I would like to because improving and doing things that are grateful for the for the for the life is better.

✓ Yes, I would like more parks because improving and doing things that are good for life is better.

The original has unclear phrasing and repeated words. 'Improving and doing things that are grateful for the life' is ungrammatical. Use gerunds correctly and a clearer phrase 'good for life' or 'improve quality of life.' Remove repetition. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× And I like to see more parks because we can get free time there and children can play there also.

✓ And I would like to see more parks because we can have free time there and children can play there too.

Use 'have free time' rather than 'get free time' for natural collocation. Use 'too' instead of 'also' at sentence end for natural flow. Grammar problem type ID: 14

× Oh, actually, there's no specific park.

✓ Oh, actually, there isn't a specific park I want to go to.

'There's no specific park' is acceptable but clearer to specify 'I want to go to.' Maintain subject clarity. Use contraction consistency. Grammar problem type ID: 3

× I like to go to the future actually.

✓ I don't have a specific park planned for the future, actually.

Original 'I like to go to the future' is nonsensical. Clarify intent about future visits using 'planned' and 'for the future.' Use negative to express lack of specific plan. Grammar problem type ID: 7

× Actually, I like the near park. The park is near of my home because, uh, it's nice, beautiful.

✓ Actually, I like the nearby park. The park is near my home because it's nice and beautiful.

Use 'nearby' as adjective rather than 'near park' and 'near my home' not 'near of my home.' Use 'nice and beautiful' or choose one adjective; avoid filler 'uh.' Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I can enjoy my time there. And there's a lot of children I know there and my friends, we usually gather in this garden because it's beautiful.

✓ I can enjoy my time there. There are a lot of children I know there, and my friends and I usually gather in this garden because it's beautiful.

Use 'There are' with plural 'a lot of children.' Correct word order for 'my friends and I' as the subject. Maintain parallel structure and punctuation. Grammar problem type ID: 27