Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct by using a clear topic sentence, correct verb tenses, and varied vocabulary. Avoid repetition (e.g., 'still like') and minor errors ('going to park' → 'going to parks'). Add one specific supporting detail and a linking word to show clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, there was a huge park near my home where my mother and I would often walk together, especially when I felt tired, because the quiet paths helped me relax.

Gợi ý: Use consistent tense and avoid filler words (uh). Start with a clear topic sentence about the present, then add a brief past reference with a linking word. Reduce repetition ("It makes me happy / It made me happy"). Provide one specific example of what you do there.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks now. For instance, when I lived in Australia I often read books on a sunny bench, and even today I like to sit and read because it helps me relax and lift my mood.

Gợi ý: Correct singular/plural errors and remove fillers. Give a clear reason and one concrete consequence or example. Use linking words (because, so, therefore) to connect ideas and sound coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are none near my current home; as a result, I have nowhere quiet to rest, and I miss walking in green spaces on weekends.

Gợi ý: Avoid slang ('wanna') and unclear phrasing. Give a direct answer, then one specific example of a park and why you want to visit it. Use correct grammar and linking words to explain the dream clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit parks in Los Angeles in the future. For example, I dream of visiting Griffith Park where I could grab a coffee and go for a run while enjoying the views of the city.

× Yes, I really loved going to park when I was tired and I still like going to park when I have free time.

✓ Yes, I really loved going to the park when I was tired, and I still like going to parks when I have free time.

The phrase 'going to park' is missing the article 'the' or should use the plural 'parks' for general activities. Use 'the park' when referring to parks in general as a location you visit habitually in the past; use 'parks' to indicate visiting parks in general now. Also add a comma before the conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'the park' for a specific habitual place in the past or 'parks' for general plural visits.

× I still remember I visited a park with my mother because there's a huge park near my home.

✓ I still remember visiting a park with my mother because there was a huge park near my home.

'I still remember I visited' is grammatically acceptable but more natural is 'I still remember visiting'. More importantly, the clause 'there's a huge park near my home' should match past time frame 'visited', so use past tense 'there was'. Suggestion: Keep consistent past tense when recounting past events.

× Yes, I still like going to park now, uh, when I lived in Australia, I really enjoy going to park when I have free time.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now. When I lived in Australia, I really enjoyed going to parks when I had free time.

Again 'going to park' needs 'parks' or 'the park'. The sentence mixes present 'I still like' with past 'when I lived'; within the past clause, verbs should be past tense ('enjoyed', 'had'). Split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: Use plural 'parks' for general statements and keep tense consistent within each clause.

× Also, I read a book there.

✓ Also, I read books there.

Context suggests habitual action (reading there in general), so present/simple past choice depends on context. If speaking about current habit, 'I read books there' (present simple) is appropriate; if referring to a past visit, 'I read a book there' is fine. To match surrounding present discussion of enjoyment, use 'I read books there.' Suggestion: Use plural 'books' for habitual action or keep singular with past tense for a specific occasion.

× It makes me happy. It made me happy.

✓ It made me happy.

The speaker mixed present and past. When referring to a past visit ('I read a book there'), use past 'made'. If referring to current feeling from the habit, use present 'makes'. Choose one tense for clarity. Here, because the previous sentence described a past action, 'It made me happy' is consistent. Suggestion: Maintain consistent tense across related sentences.

× Yes, I'd like to see more park in my cities because there's no parks near my current home so umm, honestly I have no idea where I can take a rest.

✓ Yes, I'd like to see more parks in my city because there are no parks near my current home, so honestly I have no idea where I can rest.

Multiple errors: 'more park' should be plural 'more parks'; 'my cities' likely should be singular 'my city' matching context; 'there's no parks' is incorrect subject-verb agreement and article—use 'there are no parks'; 'take a rest' is unidiomatic—use 'rest' or 'take a break'. Also add a comma before 'so' for readability. Suggestion: Use plural for general countable nouns, ensure subject-verb agreement with 'there are', and prefer natural collocations like 'rest' or 'take a break'.

× I feel like I lost my hobby.

✓ I feel like I have lost my hobby.

The sentence mixes present feeling 'I feel like' with simple past 'I lost'. To express a present feeling about a past change, use present perfect 'have lost'. Suggestion: Use present perfect to link past actions to the present state.

× Uh, I don't like to say I wanna go to the park in LA because each one of my dream that I grab a coffee and run around the park in LA.

✓ Uh, I don't want to say I want to go to the parks in LA because one of my dreams is to grab a coffee and run around a park in LA.

Multiple issues: 'don't like to say' is awkward—use 'don't want to say' or 'prefer not to say'; 'wanna' is informal—use 'want to'; 'each one of my dream' is ungrammatical—use 'one of my dreams'; 'that I grab' needs 'is to grab' to introduce an infinitive phrase describing the dream; 'run around the park in LA' should be 'run around a park in LA' or 'parks' depending on meaning. Also adjust plurality: 'the park in LA' is too specific; use 'parks' or 'a park'. Suggestion: Use standard modal constructions ('want to'), correct countable noun forms ('one of my dreams'), and use 'is to + verb' to describe intentions or dreams.