Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, correct verb tenses, avoid repetition, and add one specific supporting detail. Use a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes. I loved going to the park as a child because my friends and I used to meet there every afternoon to play football. For example, we would play until sunset and then buy snacks from a small stall outside the park.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear direct answer, use correct present tenses, avoid vague phrases like 'very boring thing', and give a specific reason with a linking word (e.g. 'because' or 'so').

Ví dụ: Not really. I rarely visit parks now because I prefer exercising at the gym where there are machines and organized classes that help me stay fit.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (articles and word order), and provide a specific benefit with a linking word. Mention one concrete example to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. I think the city needs more parks because they give children safe spaces to play and stay active; for instance, a neighborhood park could include a playground and walking paths for families.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, use natural wording and correct grammar, avoid exaggerated or unclear phrases ('madly boring'), and give a concise reason with one specific detail about the alternative (gym).

Ví dụ: No, I probably won't. I prefer going to the gym in the future because it offers equipment and classes that motivate me to keep fit, such as spinning or strength-training sessions.

× Yes, I would like to go to the park because on that my friends are coming come came there to play a games with me, so I love to like go to the park.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park because at that time my friends used to come there to play games with me, so I loved going to the park.

Multiple issues: 1) Tense consistency: question asks about childhood, so past tense is appropriate (change 'would like' to 'liked', 'are coming/come/came' to 'used to come'). 2) Preposition: use 'at that time' instead of 'on that'. 3) Countable noun/article: 'games' does not need an article 'a', so change 'a games' to 'games'. 4) Redundancy and word choice: 'so I love to like go' is awkward; use 'so I loved going'. Suggestion: maintain past tense consistently for childhood memories, use correct prepositions, remove unnecessary articles, and use natural collocations like 'used to' and 'liked going'.

× No, now what time I don't like to go to the park because on that time I'll see a very boring thing to go to the park rather than I go to the gym to stay fit.

✓ No, now I don't like going to the park because I find it very boring; instead I go to the gym to stay fit.

Issues: 1) Present tense and verb forms: 'I don't like to go' is acceptable but 'I don't like going' is more natural. Remove 'now what time' and 'on that time' and replace with 'now' and avoid future 'I'll see'. 2) Word order and structure: 'I'll see a very boring thing to go to the park' is ungrammatical; use 'I find it very boring'. 3) Use conjunction 'instead' rather than 'rather than I go'. Suggestion: simplify the sentence, use present simple for habits ('I don't like', 'I go'), and use natural verbs like 'find' for opinions about things.

× Yes, I would like to see the more parks in the cities because of children can stay fit in the parks to play a games or they are physically active in the ground. So I would like to see.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in the city because children can stay fit in parks by playing games and being physically active. So I would like that.

Issues: 1) Article use: remove 'the' before 'more parks' and change 'in the cities' to 'in the city' to match the question about your city. 2) Sentence structure and modal use: 'because of children can' is incorrect; use 'because children can' or 'because of this, children can'. 3) Countable noun/article: remove 'a' before 'games'. 4) Word choice/order: 'physically active in the ground' should be 'being physically active' or 'active outdoors'. Suggestion: streamline causal clause ('because children can...'), use correct articles, and use parallel verb forms ('playing games and being physically active').

× No, I don't like to go to the park in the future because I feel that in park there are a madly boring things, but rather than I'll go to a gym to stay fit because in gym there are many motivations in motivation environment are there.

✓ No, I don't want to go to the park in the future because I feel that parks are very boring; instead I will go to the gym to stay fit because gyms have a motivating environment.

Issues: 1) Tense and modality: for future preference use 'I don't want to' or 'I will not' rather than 'I don't like to go in the future'. 2) Article use: 'in park' -> 'parks' or 'the park'; 'a madly boring things' -> 'very boring' and remove number/article errors. 3) Word choice and sentence structure: 'rather than I'll go to a gym' should be 'instead I will go to the gym'. 4) Awkward phrase 'many motivations in motivation environment are there' -> 'have a motivating environment' or 'offer motivation'. Suggestion: use 'instead' for alternatives, correct article usage ('the gym' or 'gyms'), and choose natural adjectives/adverbs ('very boring', 'motivating').