Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear and directly answer the question with one topic sentence about whether you liked parks as a child. Avoid unclear phrases and irrelevant words. Use 2–3 supporting details (what you did there, who you went with, a memory), linked with simple connectors (for example, because, so, and). Keep it under five sentences and use accurate vocabulary.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were a peaceful place to relax after school. For example, I often went to Milestone Park with my family where we would have picnics and play games. I also enjoyed meeting other children there, which helped me make friends.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear yes/no or brief statement about current habit, then give 1–2 specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea and correct personal detail errors (e.g., 'living alone' vs mentioning husband). Use concise sentences.

Ví dụ: I don't go to parks often now because of my busy schedule since I moved to Canada. Also, I live with my husband who works long hours, so I usually stay home rather than visit parks on weekdays.

Gợi ý: Answer directly whether you would like more parks (yes/no) and support with 2 specific reasons (health, community, accessibility). Use clear linking words (because, so, therefore), correct plural/singular forms and avoid filler words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve people's physical and mental health. For example, having parks near neighborhoods makes it easier for families and older people to exercise and socialize.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer naming the park you'd like to visit, and include 2–3 specific reasons (features, activities) linked with words like because or for example. Avoid repetition and filler sounds, and correct grammar (e.g., 'there are a lot of parks', 'it is famous for its view and lake').

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Binaur Park in my city because it is famous for its beautiful views and a large lake. For example, I want to walk along the lakeside and take photos of the scenery.

× Well, Barack, actors born for every loop, every person in their life because in the heck from the hectic schedule, you have to take a break for refresh.

✓ Well, Barack, actors are born for every role in life, and because of hectic schedules, you have to take a break to refresh.

The original sentence has garbled sentence structure and incorrect word choices ('for every loop', 'in the heck from the hectic schedule'). Rearranging clauses and replacing incorrect words clarifies meaning: use 'actors are born for every role in life' and 'because of hectic schedules' and the infinitive 'to refresh'. Suggestion: plan sentences with a clear subject, verb, and object and replace unclear phrases with standard expressions.

× The Milestone Park is the best place to go outside and take some rest.

✓ Milestone Park is the best place to go and get some rest.

'Go outside' is unnecessary because 'go' with a place is enough; 'take some rest' is nonstandard in this context — 'get some rest' is correct. Also drop the definite article if the park name does not require it. Suggestion: use 'go to [place]' and 'get some rest'.

× Instead of that, you can also meet a different, uh, people in the park.

✓ You can also meet different people in the park.

'Instead of that' is inappropriate here and 'a different people' mixes singular article with plural noun. Remove 'a' and the filler phrase. Suggestion: use 'different people' for plural and avoid irrelevant transitions.

× Well as I am living in Canada, due to hectic schedule I do not have time to go outside for a park and everything.

✓ Well, as I live in Canada, due to a hectic schedule I do not have time to go to parks or go outside.

Use simple present 'I live' for a current state rather than 'I am living' (both can work but simple present is more natural here). 'Go outside for a park' is ungrammatical; use 'go to parks' or 'go outside'. Add 'a' before 'hectic schedule' and plural 'parks' if general. Suggestion: use 'I live' and 'go to parks' for general habits.

× So that's why I usually am not going outside because as I'm living alone my husband's always on the work so that's why I'm usually not going to a park all every time.

✓ So I usually do not go outside because I live alone and my husband is always at work, so I do not go to the park very often.

Pronoun and possessive errors: 'my husband's always on the work' is incorrect; use 'my husband is always at work'. Redundant phrases 'that's why' repeated; 'not going to a park all every time' is ungrammatical — use 'do not go to the park very often'. Also use simple present for habits: 'I usually do not go'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct preposition 'at work', and match verb forms for habits.

× Well, uh, park play a significant role in human life, so it is the responsibility of commun come uh, community system to uh, develop different parks near all the houses and in all the areas so that people can easily go outside instead of any problem.

✓ Parks play a significant role in human life, so it is the responsibility of the community system to develop parks near all houses and in all areas so that people can easily go outside without any problems.

Subject-verb agreement and singular/plural issues: 'park play' should be 'parks play'. 'Commun come community system' is garbled; use 'the community system'. 'Different parks' can be simplified to 'parks'; 'near all the houses' -> 'near all houses'. Use 'without any problems' rather than 'instead of any problem'. Suggestion: ensure subjects and verbs agree and use plural/singular consistently.

× Uh, as I'm living in a Canada, so there is no doubt that there is a lot of parks available in Canada after 5 minutes drive.

✓ As I live in Canada, there is no doubt that there are a lot of parks available within a five-minute drive.

Errors: 'in a Canada' should be 'in Canada' (no article). 'there is a lot of parks' mixes singular 'is' with plural 'parks' — use 'there are a lot of parks' or 'a lot of parkS'; 'after 5 minutes drive' -> 'within a five-minute drive'. Suggestion: match verb number with noun (there are + plural) and use correct articles and expressions for distance/time.

× But yeah, there is a, one part, uh, in my city, which name is Binaur Park.

✓ But yes, there is one park in my city called Binaur Park.

'One part' should be 'one park'; 'which name is' is nonstandard — use 'called' or 'named'. Remove unnecessary commas and fillers. Suggestion: use 'called' to give names and keep the sentence concise.

× And uh, it is a very famous for their view, for its view and it's uh, a lake. That's why.

✓ It is very famous for its view and for its lake.

Grammar: 'a very famous' needs an object ('for its view'), and mixing 'their' with singular 'it' is incorrect; use 'its'. 'It's a lake' is awkward; say 'for its lake' or 'because it has a lake'. Remove 'That's why' which is incomplete. Suggestion: use consistent pronouns (its) with singular subjects and complete the reason phrase (famous for its view and its lake).