Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct grammar, be concise, use a topic sentence then 1–2 supporting details with linking words. Use correct verb forms and singular/plural nouns (e.g. 'parks helped me relax', 'made friends').

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. They helped me make friends and I liked chatting and playing games with them. Also, the fresh air and open space made me feel relaxed.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb agreement (parks make, not makes), and avoid awkward phrases like 'past' or 'at the present times.' Use a linking word to add a second point (e.g. 'also' or 'as well').

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. They help me relax and keep my mind active, and I also use them for physical activities such as jogging and walking.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and explain two clear reasons with correct word choice (e.g. 'provide recreational space' rather than 'provides experience'). Fix subject-verb agreement and spelling ('places' not 'lacing'). Use a linking word (for example, 'because' and 'also').

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide recreational spaces for families and encourage exercise. For example, more parks would make it easier for people to go jogging or play sports.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give specific details using correct tense and clearer phrasing. Correct awkward constructions ('I heard it has a lake', 'I like to meet my friends there and exercise'). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word such as 'also'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to visit a recently opened park in my city because I heard it has a lake. I would like to meet my friends there and do some exercises, and I think the scenery would be lovely.

× If I remember correctly I liked going to pass as a child because it made more friends and I liked to chit chat with them and visited.

✓ If I remember correctly, I liked going to parks as a child because I made more friends, I liked to chat with them, and I visited often.

Errors: 'pass' is a spelling/word choice error (should be 'parks') and not on list, but core grammatical issues are past tense phrasing and verb forms. 'It made more friends' uses 'it' incorrectly; the student (I) is the subject who made friends. 'Chit chat' is informal but 'chat' is the verb. 'Visited' lacks an object or adverb and should be 'visited often' or 'I visited them' but here 'I visited (parks) often' is clearer. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense with correct subject-verb structure: 'I liked... because I made more friends, I liked to chat with them, and I visited often.' Note: Also add a comma after the introductory clause for clarity.

× Honestly I like going to past at the present times because parks provide relaxation and makes active mind and also I like to do physical activities in parks like jogging or walking.

✓ Honestly, I like going to parks at the present time because parks provide relaxation and make the mind active, and I also like to do physical activities in parks like jogging or walking.

Errors: 'past' is a wrong word (should be 'parks') but primary grammar issues: subject-verb agreement and tense consistency. 'parks provide' is correct plural, but 'makes active mind' is incorrect: plural subject 'parks' must take plural verb 'make', and word order needs 'make the mind active'. 'at the present times' is awkward: use 'at the present time' or 'now'. Place 'also' appropriately. Suggestion: Keep present simple for habitual actions and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct word order.

× Obviously, I like to see more parks in my city because it provides experience and give more opportunity for lacing and I like to do physical activities like jogging, running or exercises in city parks.

✓ Obviously, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide experiences and give more opportunities for leisure, and I like to do physical activities like jogging, running, or exercising in city parks.

Errors: 'it provides' uses singular pronoun 'it' for plural 'parks' — use 'they provide'. 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' or rephrased. 'give more opportunity for lacing' contains errors: 'opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities' and 'lacing' is wrong word; likely 'leisure'. 'exercises' as a noun is ok but parallel form 'exercising' fits better with 'doing'. Suggestion: Use correct pronoun number, plural nouns where needed, correct vocabulary ('leisure'), and consistent verb/noun forms.

× I want to visit a park which is recently opened in my city and I heard that in this park or a lake also include and I prefer to do meet with my friends and I do exercises in this park.

✓ I want to visit a park that recently opened in my city. I heard that this park also includes a lake, and I plan to meet my friends and exercise there.

Errors: Tense and clause structure: 'which is recently opened' should be 'that recently opened' or 'which has recently opened' for correct recent past. 'I heard that in this park or a lake also include' is ungrammatical; correct wording is 'this park also includes a lake.' 'I prefer to do meet with my friends' is incorrect: use 'I plan to meet my friends' or 'I prefer to meet my friends.' 'I do exercises' is better as 'exercise' or 'do exercises' but with 'there' as place. Suggestion: Use appropriate tense for recent opening, correct relative clauses, and simplify to clear verbs like 'plan' or 'intend.'