Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and add one specific detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give a brief supporting detail (what you did or why you liked it). Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often played on the swings and climbed trees with my friends, which made weekends very fun.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and vocabulary, and explain clearly how parks help you now. Begin with a present-tense topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a linking word (for example, because or so). Avoid unclear phrases like "in temptation."

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and reduce stress. For example, walking among trees and breathing fresh air calms me after a busy workday.

Gợi ý: Make your point clear and use correct grammar. State your opinion directly, then give a specific reason with linking words (because / for example). Avoid confusing phrases; explain who would benefit and why.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because existing parks are few and located in underdeveloped areas. More parks near residential neighborhoods would give families and elderly people easy places to exercise and relax.

Gợi ý: Use correct sentence structure and give specific details about the park and your plans. Start with a clear topic sentence (present/future intention), then specify the park's name/location and what you want to do there. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" and correct verb forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I plan to visit Motorsville Valley in Bhutto in the near future because I have heard it has beautiful trails and picnic areas. I want to go there to hike, take photographs, and spend a relaxing day outdoors.

× Yeah, I like going to parks when I was a child.

✓ Yeah, I liked going to parks when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present simple 'I like' with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'liked' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: Use past tense for habits in the past: 'I liked going to parks when I was a child.'

× Yeah, I still like going to parking now because I was relating my stress when I was in temptation.

✓ Yeah, I still like going to parks now because it helps me relieve stress when I'm tempted or stressed.

Several problems: 'parking' should be 'parks' (wrong noun), 'was relating my stress' is incorrect verb choice and tense, and 'when I was in temptation' is unidiomatic. Keep present tense 'still like' and use present simple or present continuous for effects: 'it helps me relieve stress' or 'when I'm stressed'. Suggestion: Say 'I still like going to parks because it helps me relieve stress when I'm stressed.'

× Yeah, I would like to see more parks in my city because in this area there are some parks but they are in underdeveloped area, but people need servants are to be in double park here.

✓ Yeah, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are only a few parks in underdeveloped areas, and people need more parks here.

This sentence has incorrect prepositions and articles ('in underdeveloped area' should be 'in underdeveloped areas' or 'an underdeveloped area'), unclear phrase 'people need servants are to be in double park here' is ungrammatical. Simplify and correct prepositions/articles and plurality: 'there are only a few parks in underdeveloped areas' and 'people need more parks'. Suggestion: Use clear noun phrases and correct prepositions/articles: 'there are only a few parks in underdeveloped areas, and people need more parks here.'

× Yeah, actually I would like to going such a park.

✓ Yeah, actually I would like to go to a park like that.

After 'would like' the base verb (infinitive without 'to' when 'would like to' is used) must follow: 'would like to go'. Also 'such a park' is better phrased 'a park like that' and include preposition 'to'. Suggestion: 'I would like to go to a park like that.'

× I called in Motorsville Valley which is currently located in Bhutto and I was going, I was planning to go in there to have some enjoyed.

✓ I called Motorsville Valley, which is currently located in Bhutto, and I was planning to go there to enjoy myself.

Multiple issues: 'called in' is unclear—use 'called' or 'called to' depending on meaning; relative clause punctuation needed; 'go in there' should be 'go there'; 'to have some enjoyed' is ungrammatical—use 'to enjoy myself' or 'to have some fun'. Also tense 'was planning' is acceptable if speaking about a past plan. Suggestion: Clarify verb choices and object: 'I called Motorsville Valley, which is located in Bhutto, and I was planning to go there to enjoy myself.'