Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (past tense), correct subject-verb agreement, and make answer more concise with one clear topic sentence plus a supporting reason. Use linking words (because, so) and more precise vocabulary (village, supermarket, air-conditioned).

Ví dụ: Not really. I didn't have any parks nearby because my village was far from town, so I usually went to the supermarket instead because it was air-conditioned and comfortable.

Gợi ý: Use correct conditional and verb forms (If I get a chance, I will...), avoid repetition, and give specific details about activities. Use linking words (and, also) and clearer vocabulary (have a picnic, relax, watch the scenery).

Ví dụ: If I get a chance, I will definitely go to a park with my family because it is a good place to spend quality time together. For example, we could have a picnic, play games with the children, and relax while enjoying the scenery.

Gợi ý: Correct subject-verb agreement and tense (I feel), use concise structure: state opinion then give two specific reasons with linking words (because, so). Replace vague phrases with concrete benefits (exercise, social events, green space).

Ví dụ: Yes, I feel that more parks would make the city more vibrant because they provide green space for exercise and social events. As a result, people would have more opportunities to meet and stay active.

Gợi ý: Use present or future correctly and avoid repetition. Give specific reasons why you want to visit (features, activities). Fix word choice (a lot of space, enjoy the scenery). Keep answer to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I would like to visit Central Park because it is very large and has plenty of space for running and outdoor sports. I would also enjoy sitting by the lake and taking in the beautiful scenery.

× Not really, as a child I don't have any park to go because my village is far away from the town.

✓ Not really; as a child I didn't have any park to go to because my village was far away from the town.

The sentence uses present tense verbs ('don't have') when referring to past time ('as a child'), so tense consistency is wrong. Change to past simple ('didn't have', 'was') and add the preposition 'to' after 'go' for correct verb-complement structure. Suggestion: use past tense for past situations and include necessary prepositions.

× This is why I prefer to go to the supermarket instead.

✓ This is why I preferred to go to the supermarket instead.

Because the student is describing childhood habits, the past tense is appropriate ('preferred'). The original sentence used present tense inconsistent with the past context. Use past simple to match the time frame.

× It have a air conditioner where I can enjoy the cold weather.

✓ It has an air conditioner where I could enjoy the cool air.

Subject-verb agreement: 'It' requires 'has' not 'have'. Also 'a air conditioner' is incorrect article use before a vowel sound; use 'an'. 'Cold weather' inside a building is better expressed as 'cool air'; since referring to past, 'could' fits the tense. Suggestion: match verb form to singular subject and choose correct article.

× If I got a chance to go to park, I will definitely go there with my family.

✓ If I got a chance to go to a park, I would definitely go there with my family.

This is a second conditional structure expressing an unlikely or hypothetical present/future situation: the correct form is 'If + past simple, would + base verb.' The original used 'will' with 'got', mixing conditional forms. Also include the article 'a' before 'park.' Suggestion: use consistent conditional structure.

× I think Park is a place where I can enjoy a quality time with them.

✓ I think a park is a place where I can enjoy quality time with them.

'Park' needs an article in this general statement: use 'a park.' Also 'a quality time' is incorrect: 'quality time' is uncountable and does not take 'a.' Suggestion: remove the article before 'quality time' and use 'a park' for a general noun.

× We can also have some picnic, we can bring some lunch or else we can assist things still and enjoy looking at this scenario.

✓ We can also have a picnic; we can bring some lunch, or we can relax and enjoy the scenery.

Multiple issues: 'have some picnic' should be 'have a picnic' (article and noun form). 'Assist things still' is incorrect phrase — likely intended 'sit still' or 'relax.' 'Enjoy looking at this scenario' is unnatural; 'enjoy the scenery' is correct collocation. Suggestion: use correct collocations and articles, and replace unclear verbs with appropriate ones.

× Of course, I feels like more parks will definitely make the town look more vibrant.

✓ Of course, I feel that more parks will definitely make the town look more vibrant.

Subject-verb agreement: 'I' takes 'feel' not 'feels.' Also 'feels like' can be replaced by 'feel that' for clarity. The future tense 'will make' is fine here because discussing future effect. Suggestion: match verb to subject and use appropriate reporting structure.

× It will bring people together and spending some time together.

✓ It will bring people together and allow them to spend time together.

Parallel structure error: after 'will' combine verbs properly. 'Bring people together and spending' mixes infinitive/future with gerund. Use 'allow them to spend' or 'enable people to spend' to create correct parallelism. Suggestion: keep verbs in parallel forms.

× I think park will definitely become more popular when they are promoted by the town itself as well.

✓ I think the park will definitely become more popular when it is promoted by the town itself as well.

The noun 'park' is singular, so pronouns must agree: use 'the park' and 'it is promoted.' 'They' mismatches singular 'park.' Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and include articles when needed.

× I prefer going to Central Park.

✓ I would prefer to go to Central Park.

Context asks about future preference of parks to go to in the future; 'I prefer going' is general. To express future intention or choice, 'I would prefer to go to Central Park' or 'I prefer going to Central Park in the future' is clearer. Suggestion: choose modal form that matches intended meaning.

× As I mentioned before that this park might be very large and it's going to have a lot of lot space for me to exercise.

✓ As I mentioned before, this park might be very large and it will have a lot of space for me to exercise.

Remove unnecessary 'that' after 'mentioned before'; use consistent future form 'will have' rather than 'going to have' for clarity. 'A lot of lot space' is a repetition error; use 'a lot of space.' Suggestion: avoid redundant words and maintain clear tense usage.

× I also will also enjoy a scenario out there.

✓ I would also enjoy being out there.

Redundant 'also' repeated and 'enjoy a scenario' is unnatural. Use 'enjoy being out there' or 'enjoy the atmosphere.' Also match conditional mood with earlier conditional phrasing: 'would enjoy' fits. Suggestion: remove redundancy and choose natural collocations.