Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Correggi il tempo verbale e rendi la risposta più naturale e specifica. Usa una frase tematica chiara, poi dettaglia con esempi concreti (attività svolte, emozioni provate). Evita ripetizioni come "really" due volte.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I enjoyed exploring the paths and watching butterflies among the flowers, and I often played hide-and-seek with my friends under the trees.

Gợi ý: Migliora la grammatica (uso del presente semplice/perfetto) e la coesione (usa connettivi). Sii più specifico su come ti fa bene la natura e quando potresti ricominciare ad andarci.

Ví dụ: I rarely visit parks nowadays because I have a heavy workload, but I know I should make time for them. Being surrounded by nature relaxes me and boosts my concentration, so I plan to go to the park twice a week starting next month.

Gợi ý: Evita frasi ripetitive e correggi la grammatica (present perfect e participio). Fornisci un'opinione chiara e un motivo o confronto per sostenere la risposta.

Ví dụ: I don't feel there is a need for many more parks in my city because I've visited most of them. However, I would welcome new pocket parks in dense neighbourhoods where people lack green space.

Gợi ý: Rendi la risposta più fluente e correggi errori (ripetizione "go", uso di infinitivi e forma verbale). Aggiungi dettagli su quale parco a Parigi e cosa ti piace fare lì per essere più specifico.

Ví dụ: Yes, I'd love to return to Paris, especially to visit the Luxembourg Gardens. There I enjoy sitting on a bench to read, watching people sail model boats, and relaxing in the sunshine.

× I really like going to the parks when I was a child because I really enjoy staying in the nature and looking at the flowers.

✓ I really liked going to parks when I was a child because I enjoyed being in nature and looking at the flowers.

The sentence mixes present tense verbs (like/enjoy) with a past-time clause 'when I was a child'. Use past tense consistently: 'liked' and 'enjoyed'. Remove the article 'the' before 'parks' and 'nature' because general references do not need 'the'. Use 'being in nature' instead of 'staying in the nature'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Now I rarely go to the parks because I have a lot work to do, but I think I should add this to my routine because I think that be surrounded by nature improves my life.

✓ Now I rarely go to parks because I have a lot of work to do, but I think I should add this to my routine because being surrounded by nature improves my life.

Use no article before 'parks' when speaking generally. Insert the missing article in 'a lot of work'. Replace the ungrammatical clause 'I think that be surrounded by nature improves my life' with 'being surrounded by nature improves my life' (a gerund phrase). Grammar problem type ID:22

× I think I've seen all of the parks in my city because it is the city where I was born, so I have already visit them, so I think I know them really well.

✓ I think I've seen all the parks in my city because it is the city where I was born, so I have already visited them, and I think I know them really well.

The verb 'visit' should be in the past participle 'visited' to follow 'have already' (present perfect). Remove 'of' in 'all of the parks' for a more natural phrasing 'all the parks'. Use 'and' instead of the extra 'so' to avoid repetition and improve flow. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Yes, of course. I want to return to Paris that has a lot of big parks where people go go there to read and to do nothing and lay on the sun.

✓ Yes, of course. I want to return to Paris, which has a lot of big parks where people go to read, do nothing, and lie in the sun.

Use the relative pronoun 'which' (not 'that') for non-restrictive clause after 'Paris'. Remove duplicate 'go'. Use the bare infinitive 'go to read' or simply 'go to read' — here 'go to read' is correct. Replace 'lay' with the intransitive verb 'lie' for reclining (lay is transitive). Use 'in the sun' rather than 'on the sun'. Grammar problem type ID:8