Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear and grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use past tense consistently and avoid fragments. Link your ideas with a short connector if needed.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. For example, my family used to visit every Sunday, and I remember playing on the swings and having picnics with my siblings, which made those days very special.

Gợi ý: Speak more fluently and correct grammar: use present simple and plural forms properly, avoid filler words like 'like', and organize reasons with linking words (because, and, also). Give one specific reason and one example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. My friends love outdoor activities so they often invite me, and recently many parks in my area have been renovated with new walking paths and playgrounds, which makes visits more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Stay on topic and use correct vocabulary: the examiner asked about parks, not books. Start with a clear opinion, then give a specific reason and an example. Keep sentences concise and coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are only a few green spaces now. For instance, adding small neighborhood parks with benches and playgrounds would give families more places to relax and children somewhere safe to play.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and a specific detail: if you don't have a particular park in mind, say so clearly and offer a brief reason or a plan. Use present/future forms correctly and avoid unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: I don't have a specific park in mind at the moment, mainly because I'm not familiar with many parks in my area. However, I would like to visit a large botanical garden in the future if I find one, because I enjoy seeing different plants and taking long walks.

× They gone to a park when I was a child, but I have a warm memory that I. I really enjoyed that moment.

✓ I went to a park when I was a child, and I have warm memories of it. I really enjoyed those moments.

The original uses 'gone' incorrectly. 'Gone' is a past participle that requires an auxiliary (have/has/had). A simple past ('went') is appropriate for a completed action in the past. Also corrected article and noun number ('memory' -> 'memories') and sentence structure for clarity.

× Yes, I still like going to park now because like I have a friends that really wants to be outdoors so they just drag me out of my home.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now because I have friends who really want to be outdoors, so they just drag me out of my home.

'Going to park' needs the plural 'parks' or 'the park' depending on meaning. 'A friends' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a'. 'That' is replaced by 'who' for people. 'Wants' should be 'want' to agree with plural 'friends'. Also removed filler 'like' for clarity.

× And take me to park, because like nowadays, parks have gone under a very good. Infrastructure changing so it will be fun if I go to a park.

✓ They take me to the park, because nowadays parks have undergone very good infrastructure changes, so it is fun to go to a park.

'Take me to park' needs 'the park'. 'Have gone under' is incorrect; the correct phrasal verb is 'have undergone'. 'A very good. Infrastructure changing' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'very good infrastructure changes'. Adjusted tense and word order for clarity.

× Yes, I would like to see more books in my CD because in my CD there are only a few books that are still available so it will be much more. Box in my city.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are only a few parks available, so it would be much better for my city.

The student said 'books' and 'CD' and 'Box' which are incorrect words in this context; they likely meant 'parks' and 'city'. Replaced with 'parks' and 'city'. Also changed 'will be much more' to 'would be much better' for a polite wish and corrected article/number agreement.

× They're not really aim of box. That I want to go in future because I don't know much about park.

✓ There is not really any particular park that I want to go to in the future because I don't know much about parks.

'They're not really aim of box' is unclear and misuses pronouns. Rewritten to 'There is not really any particular park' which uses 'there is' correctly and 'any' for negation. 'Go in future' corrected to 'go to in the future'. 'Park' pluralized to 'parks' after 'much about'. 'Aim of box' removed as nonsensical.

× Saw gardens like my knowledge they're not really that much of it so I just like. Yeah, that's it.

✓ From what I know, there are not many gardens, so that's all I can say.

The original is fragmented and unclear. Rephrased using 'From what I know' to introduce limited knowledge, 'there are not many gardens' for quantity, and combined into a complete sentence. Removed filler 'I just like. Yeah, that's it.' and replaced with 'that's all I can say.'