Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (especially past tense), reduce repetition and add one specific detail. Use linking words to connect ideas. Keep answer within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to the park with my mother when I was a child. There were always many other children there, so I often played hide-and-seek with them. Because the park had a large playground, it was my favorite place to spend weekends.

Gợi ý: Use correct verb forms and tenses (present simple for habits). Make the response coherent by removing confusing references to the past, and give specific activities you do now. Use linking words like 'so' or 'for example'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. In my free time I usually go there to relax and exercise, for example jogging or playing badminton. Because the fresh air helps me unwind, I try to visit the park at least twice a week.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid unclear numbers or broken sentences. Use correct nouns and plural forms (parks), and provide a reason why more parks would be good. Use linking words like 'because' to explain.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve residents' health and wellbeing. Although our city already has around ten parks, new small parks near residential areas would make it easier for people to exercise and relax.

Gợi ý: Be specific about the park and why you want to visit it. Use clearer vocabulary (park, path) and add a reason or planned time. Keep sentences concise and connected with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to visit the new riverside park that just opened near my neighborhood. It has flower beds and a cycling track, and because my friends and parents also like it, we are planning to go together next weekend.

× Yes, I like going to park with my mother when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park with my mother when I was a child.

Tense inconsistent: the question asks about childhood (past). Use past tense 'liked' not 'like'. Also missing article 'the' before 'park'. Use 'the park' for a specific park visited with mother.

× The past has many children and I can play with them.

✓ There were many children and I could play with them.

Wrong vocabulary 'the past' and wrong tense/modal. Use 'There were' to state existence in the past and 'could' to indicate ability in the past. 'Many children' is acceptable as quantifier but sentence needed correct structure.

× We usually play interesting things in the park.

✓ We usually played interesting games in the park.

Word choice: 'play interesting things' is unnatural. Use 'play games' (a countable noun) and past tense 'played' to match childhood timeframe. 'Interesting' is fine as adjective modifying 'games'.

× Yes, I still going through the past.

✓ Yes, I still enjoy going to the park now.

Sentence is ungrammatical: missing auxiliary 'am' for continuous 'am going', but intended meaning is continuing enjoyment. Use present simple 'still enjoy' or 'am still going to the park'. Also 'through the past' is incorrect phrasing.

× Now in my free time I usually go to the park and it made me relaxed.

✓ Now in my free time I usually go to the park and it makes me relaxed.

Mix of present and past: 'made' is past but the activity is habitual now, so use present 'makes'. 'Relaxed' can be 'relaxed' as adjective; 'makes me relaxed' is acceptable though 'relaxes me' is more natural.

× I can do many things in the past such as do exercises and play the badminton.

✓ I can do many things there now such as exercise and play badminton.

Reference to 'in the past' conflicts with modal 'can' (present ability). Correct to 'there now' or use past modal 'could' if referring to past. Also 'do exercises' is better as 'exercise' and 'play the badminton' should be 'play badminton' without article.

× Yes, I can see many parts in my city city.

✓ Yes, I can see many parks in my city.

Typo and wrong word 'parts' instead of 'parks'; duplicated 'city'. Correct noun to 'parks' and remove repetition.

× Our city has. 10 past and I usually go to the biggest part they it is so beautiful.

✓ Our city has ten parks and I usually go to the biggest one because it is so beautiful.

Multiple issues: punctuation split 'has. 10' incorrect; 'past' should be 'parks'; 'part' should be 'one' (referring to a park); 'they it is' is ungrammatical—use 'because it is'. Also write numbers in words in running text optionally.

× Yes, there is a new path I want to go in.

✓ Yes, there is a new path I want to go to.

Preposition error: use 'go to' not 'go in' for paths/places you intend to visit. Structure 'there is a new path' is correct.

× The new path is very beautiful and my friends and my parents both like to go there, so I want to.

✓ The new path is very beautiful and both my friends and my parents like to go there, so I want to go too.

Sentence missing verb at the end 'go' and word order 'both my friends and my parents' is more natural. Add 'too' or 'also' for clarity.