Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and avoid repetition; give a clear topic sentence and a brief specific detail. Use linking words if adding details. Also correct small grammar issues (e.g., tense and word order).

Ví dụ: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. I used to go there almost every day after school to play football with my friends, which helped me relax and stay active.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use a smooth explanation with correct grammar. Combine reasons using linking words (for example, 'because' and 'also') and be specific about what you mean by 'work' and 'air pollution'. Keep it within a few sentences.

Ví dụ: Not really, because I am very busy with work and study these days, and I also worry about the recent increase in air pollution, which makes outdoor activities less pleasant.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and then add specific benefits of more parks using linking words (for example, 'because' and 'so'). Avoid repetition and minor grammar errors (e.g., 'there is no place').

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. I think more parks would be great because there are few public spaces now, so people would have places to walk, exercise, and meet friends.

Gợi ý: Be more precise: state whether you have a specific park or not, then explain why. Use linking words ('because' or 'so') and correct small mistakes ('park' and reduce repetition). Provide a brief specific example if possible.

Ví dụ: I don't have a particular park in mind, because any nearby park would do — I just want a quiet place where I can exercise or relax, for example a park with a running path and some shady benches.

× Yes I did. I always, well I always went to parks when I when I after school.

✓ Yes, I did. I always went to parks after school.

The original sentence repeats phrases and contains extra words ('when I when I') that make it ungrammatical. The tense 'went' is correct for past habitual actions, but remove the redundancy and unnecessary 'when' before 'after school' to produce a clear past-tense statement. Suggestion: keep a single past tense verb and a concise time expression ("I always went to parks after school").

× No, I don't because there there are so many work need to do every day and the air pollution is serious recently.

✓ No, I don't, because there is so much work to do every day and the air pollution has been serious recently.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement and countability (use 'there is' with uncountable 'work'), incorrect quantifier ('many' -> 'much'), missing infinitive marker ('need to do' should be 'to do' after 'work'), and tense for 'recently' (present perfect 'has been' fits ongoing recent state). Also remove duplicate 'there'. Suggestion: use 'there is so much work to do' and 'has been serious recently' for clarity and correct grammar.

× Of course, because here is no no place I can talk, take a walk or do some exercise.

✓ Of course, because there is no place here where I can talk, take a walk, or do any exercise.

Incorrect word order and duplicate 'no'. Standard English uses 'there is' to introduce existence and places 'here' after or before with a relative clause: 'there is no place here where I can...'. Also use 'any exercise' for general activity and add commas in the list. Suggestion: use 'there is no place here where I can...' for correct structure.

× I think there is no specific big part I want to go because every park can can let me do exercise or make me relax.

✓ I don't have any specific large park I want to go to, because every park lets me exercise or relax.

Multiple errors: 'part' is incorrect word (should be 'park'); duplicate 'can'; verb phrase 'can let me do exercise' is awkward — use 'lets me exercise'; 'make me relax' -> 'relax' or 'help me relax'. Also tense/modal adjustments: present simple 'lets' fits general truth. Suggestion: use 'I don't have any specific large park I want to go to' or 'There is no specific large park I want to go to' and 'every park lets me exercise or relax'.