Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문법과 단어 선택을 바로잡고 문장을 자연스럽게 구조화하세요. 과거에 대한 질문이므로 과거 시제를 사용해야 하며, 불필요한 반복을 줄이고 구체적인 기억이나 이유를 덧붙이면 좋습니다. 예: 주어+과거동사(주된 답변) + 연결어(to give more detail) + 구체적 상황(장소, 활동, 감정 등).

Ví dụ: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. I often walked there in my free time and enjoyed playing on the swings because it was a place where I could meet friends and feel free.

Gợi ý: 현재 습관을 말할 때는 현재시제와 빈도 표현을 정확히 사용하세요. 또한 혼자 가는 이유나 즐기는 활동을 구체적으로 덧붙이면 답변이 풍부해집니다. 불필요한 발화를 줄이고 문장을 간결하게 만드세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually go alone on weekends to relax and read a book, and I find it peaceful to take a long walk there.

Gợi ý: 의견 제시는 명확하게 하고 이유나 예상 효과를 덧붙이세요. 또한 부정과 긍정을 혼용하지 말고 한 가지 입장을 분명히 표현한 뒤 연결어(for example, because)를 사용해 설명하세요. 문법(there aren't many parks / I would like more parks)을 고치세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there aren't many now. More parks would provide residents with places to exercise and relax, which would improve people's health and community life.

Gợi ý: 미래 계획을 말할 때는 ‘want to’ 또는 ‘would like to’와 함께 구체적인 장소와 이유를 정확하게 표현하세요. 망설임 표현(um, uh)을 줄이고 공백을 채울 구체적 세부사항(특정 도시·공원 이름, 활동)을 추가하면 더 설득력 있습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit parks in Australia in the future, such as the Royal Botanic Garden in Sydney, because they are very beautiful and have unique native plants and peaceful walking paths.

× Yes, I like going to pass as a child so I walk a park in my free time.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child, so I used to walk in a park in my free time.

Sentence uses present tense 'like' but refers to childhood; use past tense 'liked' or 'used to'. 'Pass' is incorrect; should be 'parks'. 'I walk a park' is ungrammatical: use 'walk in a park' or 'walk in parks'. Suggestion: use past tense for habits in the past and correct noun forms. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I like going to parks now so I walk park alone in weekends. Oh like in sorry minutes?

✓ Yes, I like going to parks now, so I walk in parks alone on weekends.

Mixes present simple with incorrect noun and preposition usage. Keep present tense 'like' for current habit. 'Walk park' needs preposition 'walk in parks' and plural 'parks' or 'the park'. Use 'on weekends' for habitual actions. Remove unclear filler 'Oh like in sorry minutes?'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Umm, I'm not try to see more parks in my city, so I try to see more parks in my city, but my city isn't many park.

✓ Umm, I'm not trying to see more parks in my city, but I would like more parks because my city doesn't have many parks.

Verb form error: 'not try' should be progressive 'not trying' or 'I don't try' depending on meaning; here present continuous fits. 'My city isn't many park' is ungrammatical: use 'doesn't have many parks'. Use 'would like' to express desire. Correct plural 'parks'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I like park. Oh, I want to go park in Australia because, uh, there are very beautiful park in the city.

✓ Yes, I like parks. Oh, I want to go to parks in Australia because there are very beautiful parks in the cities.

Article and count noun errors: 'I like park' should be 'I like parks' (plural) or 'I like the park'. 'Go park' needs preposition 'go to parks'. 'There are very beautiful park' requires plural 'parks' and possibly 'in the city' -> 'in those cities' or 'in the city' depending on meaning. Use consistent plural forms. Grammar problem type ID:22