Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid tense errors and redundancy, and add one specific detail. Use linking words if adding details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. They were my favourite places because I could play on the swings and run around the large grassy areas. For example, I often spent whole afternoons building sandcastles near the playground.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, reduce repetition, and use cohesive devices. Give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons with correct verb forms and articles.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually go every evening after finishing my homework because walking in the fresh air helps me relax and clear my mind.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly (expressing desire for more parks), correct phrasing and article use, and avoid irrelevant repetition. Provide a brief reason or example to support your view.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my area. Although my village has two or three small parks that I visit daily, more green spaces would give people extra places to exercise and socialise.

Gợi ý: Use correct verb tenses and vocabulary, avoid awkward phrasing, and be specific about why you want to visit. Keep it concise and natural, with one linking phrase to expand.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit the Rose Garden in Chandigarh. I have heard that it has thousands of colourful rose bushes, and I want to see the displays and take photographs when the flowers are in full bloom.

× I went to park when I was a child because it was a place where I can play on swings and park has a large area where you can walk.

✓ I went to the park when I was a child because it was a place where I could play on the swings and the park had a large area where you could walk.

Errors: missing definite article 'the' before 'park' and 'park', incorrect modal/tense 'can' in past context, and missing article before 'swings'. Use 'the park' for a specific place and 'could' because the action is in the past; 'the swings' refers to specific equipment. Also change 'park has' to 'the park had' to keep past tense consistent.

× Definitely, I often go to park everyday in the evening after finishing my homework and there I walk in the large area in the fresh air that relax my mind.

✓ Definitely, I often go to the park every day in the evening after finishing my homework, and there I walk in the large open area in the fresh air that relaxes my mind.

Errors: missing article 'the' before 'park', 'everyday' should be two words 'every day' when meaning each day, 'large area' is awkward—'large open area' is clearer, and subject-verb agreement: 'relax my mind' should be 'relaxes my mind' because 'walking in the fresh air' (or 'the fresh air') is a singular activity that relaxes the mind. Also keep articles consistent.

× Well, I come from a rural area and there are not many parks in my village, but it has approximately two or three parks and that I usually visit everyday.

✓ Well, I come from a rural area and there are not many parks in my village, but it has approximately two or three parks that I usually visit every day.

Errors: 'that I usually visit everyday' has word order and article issues. Replace 'and that I usually visit everyday' with 'that I usually visit every day'—use 'every day' as two words, and combine correctly with 'that' to modify 'two or three parks'. The rest is fine.

× Definitely, I listen a lot about the Rose garden that is situated in Chandigarh.

✓ Definitely, I have heard a lot about the Rose Garden that is situated in Chandigarh.

Error: 'listen a lot about' is incorrect collocation; use 'have heard a lot about' to indicate receiving information. Present perfect 'have heard' suits the ongoing relevance. Also capitalize 'Rose Garden' as a proper name.

× I listen from others that they were the number of rose flowers grown in that vibrant colour.

✓ I heard from others that a large number of roses are grown there in vibrant colors.

Errors: 'listen from others' incorrect verb and preposition; use 'heard from others'. 'They were the number of rose flowers' is ungrammatical—use 'a large number of roses' or 'many roses'. Use present simple 'are grown' to describe a general fact about the garden. 'Vibrant colours' -> 'vibrant colors' (American spelling) or keep 'colours' for British; ensure plural noun 'colors' to match adjective.

× So that's why I would like to visit that park in my future.

✓ So that's why I would like to visit that park in the future.

Error: 'in my future' is unnatural; use 'in the future' to express a general future intention. 'Would like to visit' already correctly expresses the desire.