Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Thí sinh

Yes.

Giám khảo

Do you still like going to parks now?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do.

Giám khảo

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Thí sinh

No, I don't.

Giám khảo

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Thí sinh

Umm, I think Central Park.

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Part 1

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: Cevabınızı genişletin ve nedenini belirtin. Kısa "Yes" yerine bir konu cümlesi kurun, ardından 1-2 destekleyici detay ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (because, so, and) kullanarak akışı sağlayın. Cümle sayısını 2-3 cümleyle sınırlayın ve özgün örnek verin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because they were safe places to play. For example, I used to climb trees and play hide-and-seek with my friends every weekend, which helped me stay active and make memories.

Do you still like going to parks now?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Cevabınızı genişleterek güncel alışkanlıklarınızı ve nedenlerinizi ekleyin. Kısa "Yes, I do" yerine bir konu cümlesi kurun, sonra zaman ifadesi ve sebep verin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak (because, so, and) mantıklı bir akış oluşturun ve 2-3 cümlede kalın.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and exercise. For instance, I often go for a jog there in the mornings and sometimes meet friends for a picnic, which makes my weekends more refreshing.

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: Olumsuz cevap verirken alternatif görüşünüzü açıklayın. Sadece "No" demek yerine neden daha fazla parka gerek duymadığınızı belirtin veya ne tür parklara ihtiyaç olduğunu söyleyin. Bağlaçlarla gerekçe ve örnek verin ve 2-3 cümlede net olun.

Ví dụ: Not really, because I think the city already has enough green spaces but they need better maintenance. For example, instead of more parks, improving facilities like benches and lighting in existing parks would make them more usable.

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Daha net ve detaylı yanıt verin. Park ismini belirtirken neden gitmek istediğinizi ve ne yapmayı planladığınızı ekleyin. Giriş cümlesi, gerekçe ve kısa bir örnek veya plan şeklinde 2-3 cümle kullanın. Gereksiz duraklamalardan (umm) kaçının.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Central Park because I have heard it is very large and scenic. I plan to walk around the lake and visit the famous spots there, and maybe rent a bike to see more of the park in one day.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Umm, I think Central Park.

✓ Umm, I think I'd like to go to Central Park in the future.

The original reply is a sentence fragment and lacks a verb phrase to answer the question 'Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?'. This is a sentence structure error. Suggestion: include a full clause with modal/auxiliary or main verb (e.g., 'I'd like to go to', 'I want to visit') so the response is a complete sentence and matches the future-intention context.

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