Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear and direct: start with a concise topic sentence answering the question, then add 1–2 specific supporting details. Use correct grammar (past tense) and avoid unnecessary words. Link ideas with simple connectors if needed.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often went there with my father and my friends, and we used to play football and have picnics on weekends.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and a clear reason. Use present tense for current habits and avoid filler words. Provide one specific detail about why you no longer go or how you feel about parks now.

Ví dụ: I don’t visit parks very often now because I am busy with university and work. When I do go, I usually prefer quiet cafés or gyms rather than busy parks.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a clear, coherent reason. Use linking words (because, so) and specific benefits (health, community, children’s play). Avoid unrelated or unclear words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they give children safe places to play and help improve community health by encouraging outdoor activity.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear, simple answer naming a specific park or type of park and a reason. Do not apologize or repeat. Keep to 1–2 supporting sentences and be specific about what attracts you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the city botanical gardens in the future because I enjoy seeing rare plants and relaxing in a peaceful environment.

× Yes, I like going to Parks the child because I have a father with my friends, that's all.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because I went with my father and my friends.

Original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect tense and wording ('like' should be past 'liked' to match 'as a child'), wrong capitalization ('Parks' should be 'parks'), awkward phrase 'the child' should be 'as a child', and unclear phrase 'I have a father with my friends' should be 'I went with my father and my friends'. Suggestion: use past tense when describing habitual past actions and keep nouns lowercase unless proper names. Use clear subject-verb constructions.

× I can't go to parks now because I am 21 years old. Uh, and yeah, I have a boring at the time parks.

✓ I don't often go to parks now because I am 21 years old, and the parks are boring at this time.

Problems: 'can't go to parks now' is unnatural if meaning 'do not often go' — use 'don't often go' or 'rarely go'. 'I have a boring at the time parks' is ungrammatical; should be 'the parks are boring at this time' using adjective 'boring' to describe 'parks' and proper article 'the'. Suggestion: match verb forms to current habitual actions and place adjectives after linking verbs.

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I like I love children and people children have fun in the parks and. Vengeance.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I love to see children and people having fun in the parks.

Errors: redundant fragments ('I like I love'), incorrect noun order ('people children'), and stray word 'Vengeance' which is irrelevant. Use 'love to see' or 'love seeing' followed by 'children and other people having fun'. Suggestion: remove redundancy and irrelevant words and use gerund 'having fun' to describe ongoing activity.

× Yes, I want to go in the sorry, sorry, sorry. Uh no, I want to go to the in the future because in the future is AI there there are a lot of AI.

✓ Yes, I want to visit parks in the future because there may be many AI features there.

Original contains repetitions, filler words, and unclear phrasing. 'Go to the in the future' is incomplete. Also 'in the future is AI there there are a lot of AI' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'there may be many AI features there' or 'there may be a lot of AI'. Suggestion: remove fillers, state the destination ('parks'), and use modal 'may' to indicate future possibility. Use clear noun phrase 'AI features' if referring to technology.