Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, use a clear topic sentence, and add one specific supporting detail. Correct tense and articles, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to contrast past and present.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often visited a nearby park with my father when I was in elementary school, where we would feed the ducks and play on the swings. However, I rarely go to parks now because I have less free time.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms and contractions, and give a specific reason with a linking word. Keep it concise and natural.

Ví dụ: Not really. As a nurse in Taiwan, I am usually very busy after work, so I prefer to relax at home rather than go to the park.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct noun forms and articles, and provide a specific benefit with a linking word. Use natural vocabulary (e.g., 'opportunities' and 'exercise').

Ví dụ: Absolutely. More parks would give people more opportunities to go outside and take part in outdoor exercise, which helps improve physical fitness and mental well-being.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence, correct the park name if necessary, use correct article and tense, and give a realistic plan. Avoid filler words and merge sentences with linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit several national parks in Taiwan, for example Alishan National Scenic Area. However, I rarely have long vacations, so I hope to plan a longer trip next year when I can take time off work.

× Yes I did. I used to go into park with my father when I was elementary school student.

✓ Yes, I did. I used to go to the park with my father when I was an elementary school student.

Use past tense and correct preposition: 'go to' not 'go into' for visiting parks. Include articles: 'the park' refers to a specific noun and 'an' before 'elementary school student'. Also add commas for clarity.

× However now I'm not really go to park at all.

✓ However, now I don't really go to the park at all.

Present simple negative requires auxiliary 'do': 'do not/go' not 'am not go'. Use article 'the' with 'park' when speaking generally about visiting the park.

× Not really, because as a nurse in Taiwan it's quite busy after work, so I prefer stay at home, not go to the park.

✓ Not really, because as a nurse in Taiwan I'm quite busy after work, so I prefer to stay at home rather than go to the park.

Use correct subject-verb form: 'I'm quite busy' instead of 'it's quite busy' since you refer to yourself. Use infinitive 'prefer to stay' and compare activities with 'rather than' or 'rather than go'. Add article 'the' before 'park'.

× Absolutely, because a lot of park makes people have more chance to go to outside and have more outdoor activity to enhance their muscle strength.

✓ Absolutely, because a lot of parks give people more chances to go outside and have more outdoor activities to enhance their muscle strength.

Countable noun 'park' needs plural 'parks' with 'a lot of'. Verb agreement: plural subject 'parks' takes plural verb 'give' not 'makes'. Use 'chances' plural and 'go outside' (no 'to'). 'Outdoor activities' should be plural to match 'more'.

× Yes, there are some national parks I want to visit in Taiwan, for example Alisa National Park. However, I don't have long vacation for visit National Park so but I would be.

✓ Yes, there are some national parks I want to visit in Taiwan, for example Alishan National Park. However, I don't have a long vacation to visit the national parks now, but I would like to in the future.

Add article 'a' before 'long vacation'. Use infinitive 'to visit'. Remove incorrect conjunction order 'so but' and replace with 'but'. Use 'would like to' to express desire. Use consistent articles: 'the national parks' or 'national parks' and correct proper noun 'Alishan' if intended; keep capitalization consistent.