Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Відповідь потребує покращення в граматиці, словорядку і конкретизації. Почніть із чіткої темної фрази, виправте минулий час (якщо мова про дитинство), додайте одне-два конкретні приклади й використайте зв’язки для плавності (наприклад, 'and' або 'because'). Уникайте запитань до екзаменатора в відповіді.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often played tag and football with my friends, and we also enjoyed exploring the playground equipment. Because the parks were nearby, we spent many afternoons there.

Gợi ý: Покращте граматику (теперішній простий або тривалий), структуру речення і зв’язки. Почніть з чіткої головної думки, потім додайте коротку деталь про те, з ким і чому ви ходите в парк. Використайте сполучники (for example, and, because) і подбайте про правильний порядок слів.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I often walk there with my friend Sam, and we usually talk about our week while we walk because it helps us relax.

Gợi ý: Відповідь некоректна граматично і розрізнена; з’єднайте думки в одне або два речення. Сформулюйте бажання (would like) правильно, поясніть причину бажання (наприклад, більше зелені, місця для відпочинку) і наведіть приклад, хто користуватиметься парком.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city. For example, a large park with trees and walking paths would encourage my friends and me to exercise and spend time outdoors.

Gợi ý: Потрібно уточнити, що саме ви маєте на увазі (парк у Франції) і використати правильні граматичні конструкції для майбутніх бажань (would like / want to). Додайте деталі, чому цей парк привабливий (наприклад, ландшафт, квіти) і як ви плануєте відвідати його.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit a famous park in France in the future. I imagine a large forested park full of flowers and walking trails, and I would go there to enjoy the scenery and take photos.

× Yes, I like them. Are you play with my friend running and playing game with different children?

✓ Yes, I liked them. I used to play with my friends, running and playing games with different children.

The student mixes present and past time references. The question asks about childhood, so past tense should be used. Use 'liked' for past preference, 'used to' for habitual past actions, plural 'friends' and plural 'games'. Also change 'Are you play' (incorrect word order and tense) to 'I used to play'. Suggestion: Use past simple or 'used to' when talking about repeated actions in childhood, and ensure subject-verb order is correct.

× Yes, I like I go walk in the park with my friend and Sam we talk.

✓ Yes, I like going for walks in the park with my friends; Sam and I talk.

The student mixes simple present statements incorrectly and uses incorrect verb forms. To express habitual actions use gerund 'like going' and collocate 'go for a walk' or 'go walking'. Also use correct pronoun order 'Sam and I' and add conjunction or punctuation. Suggestion: Use 'I like going for walks' and plural 'friends' if more than one; keep consistent present tense for current habits.

× Yes, I like in my city have. A big park. Exam is forest and my friend like walk them.

✓ Yes, I would like my city to have a big park. It would be a forest park, and my friends would like to walk there.

The original contains fragmented sentences and incorrect word order. 'I like in my city have' should be 'I would like my city to have' to express desire. 'Exam is forest' is unclear—interpreted as 'It would be a forest park'. Use 'friends' plural and 'walk there' instead of 'walk them'. Suggestion: Use 'I would like' + object + 'to have' to express wishes and use complete clauses.

× Yes, my dream goal in the park in France, the big forest and more flowers. More people go in this park because they like.

✓ Yes, my dream is to visit a park in France with a large forest and many flowers. More people will go to this park because they will like it.

The student mixes nouns and fragments instead of a proper future or infinitive structure. Use 'my dream is to visit' for goals. For future events use 'will' to indicate people going in the future and 'like it' to complete the clause. Suggestion: Use 'my dream is to' + verb, and 'will' for future predictions; include objects for verbs ('like it').