Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Reduce hesitations and correct tense and plural errors (e.g., use 'could meet', 'friends', 'park' → 'parks'). Use linking words like 'also' or 'for example' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. For example, I could meet many friends there and we often played badminton together, which was my favorite sport.

Gợi ý: Give a direct response first, then one clear reason with specific detail. Fix grammatical mistakes (use 'now', 'parks are', 'I need transport', 'I have little time'). Avoid repetition. Use a linking word such as 'because' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: Not really. Parks are quite far from my home, so I need to arrange transportation and therefore I have very little time to spend there.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a specific benefit. Correct vocabulary (parks, city), remove hesitations, and use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore'. Be realistic about time expressions (e.g., 'within a short walk' or 'minutes away').

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because then I could reach them within a few minutes by bike, and I would be able to invite friends more often for picnics or sports.

Gợi ý: Be specific about which park and why. Start with a clear topic sentence then describe the activities (e.g., science-themed events) and who you will go with. Fix grammar ('there are', 'science-themed activities', 'with my family') and avoid vague endings.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit a park that hosts science-themed activities in the future because I could learn about nature and science while having fun with my family.

× As a child I liked going to park since I can met umm, I can met more friend.

✓ As a child I liked going to parks since I could meet more friends.

The noun 'park' should be plural 'parks' when speaking generally. 'Can met' mixes present ability 'can' with past verb 'met'; use 'could meet' for past habitual actions. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'more'. Use consistent past tense for a past time frame.

× Other than that I also uh, can play my favorite sports such as badminton, umm, during uh my time at park.

✓ Other than that, I could also play my favorite sports such as badminton during my time at the park.

The sentence describes past habitual activities, so use past modality 'could' not 'can'. 'At park' needs the definite article 'the park'. Keep word order: 'could also play' is natural. 'Favorite sports' is fine plural.

× As if now I don't really like going to parks since uh, the parks is very far from my home so I need to have my own transportation to go to parks so I have just a little time to spend at the parks because of it.

✓ At the moment I don't really like going to parks since the parks are very far from my home, so I need my own transportation to go to them and I only have a little time to spend there.

Use present tense 'don't' for current preference. 'As if now' is unnatural; use 'At the moment' or 'Right now'. 'The parks is' has subject-verb agreement error; use 'parks are'. 'Have my own transportation' is preferable to 'need to have'. Avoid repeating 'parks'; use pronoun 'them'. 'Because of it' is vague; 'there' or 'because of that' is clearer.

× I would like to see more parts in my CD so I could umm go there with my own transportation within a minute.

✓ I would like to see more parks in my city so I could go there with my own transportation within a minute.

'Parts' is a misspelling of 'parks'. 'CD' likely means 'city' — use 'city'. Maintain conditional 'could' for hypothetical desire. 'Within a minute' is acceptable if intending 'very close'.

× Other than that I could umm invite more friend to come with me since it's very near with me.

✓ Other than that, I could invite more friends to come with me since it's very near me.

Use plural 'friends' for 'more'. 'Near with me' is incorrect prepositional usage; use 'near me'. 'Invite more friends to come with me' is natural word order.

× In the future I would like to go to the park.

✓ In the future I would like to go to the park.

This sentence is correct as written; it properly uses 'would like' to express a future desire. No grammar change needed.

× There is also included a science stream activities so I could learn science while I'm having fun with my family.

✓ There are also science stream activities included so I can learn about science while having fun with my family.

'Activities' is plural, so use 'are' not 'is'. 'There is also included' is awkward; place 'included' after the noun or say 'included' at end. Use 'can' (present/future) instead of 'could' if referring to planned future opportunities. 'Learn science' is fine but 'learn about science' is slightly more natural.

× Other than that, I could also learn new things within my.

✓ Other than that, I could also learn new things on my own.

The original ends with incomplete phrase 'within my' which is ungrammatical. Determine intended meaning: likely 'on my own' or 'during the visit'. 'On my own' fits context meaning independently; rephrase to complete the sentence.