Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Focus on a clear, direct topic sentence and use correct tense and simple sentence structures. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Include one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., because, for example).

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were a place where I could play freely. For example, my father often promised to take me to Parks Garden after school when I got a high score, and we would feed the ducks and play on the swings.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear direct answer (yes/no) then give concise reasons with correct tense and linking words. Avoid repeating the same phrase ("because"). Keep within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Not really; I don't go to parks much now because I moved away to attend university. I am usually busy with classes and studying, so I rarely have time for leisure activities like visiting parks.

Gợi ý: Keep the answer natural and concise. Begin with a clear statement, then give specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases (e.g., 'parking Mercedes').

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Our city currently has very few green spaces, so the authorities should build more parks and small gardens because they offer places for exercise, relaxation and community events, which would improve residents' quality of life.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and correct word choice and grammar. Give one clear reason and a brief supporting detail. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid vague words such as 'advisement'.

Ví dụ: That's a hard question, but if I had to choose, I would like to visit Hoyan Park in Tanguy Province because it is said to have spectacular views and many sightseeing spots, such as mountain lookouts and flower gardens.

× When I was trying, for example, my father's often promised to take me up there after school when I get away, mean when I got a high score in the exam.

✓ For example, my father often promised to take me there after school when I got a high score in an exam.

The original sentence mixes tenses and has incorrect verb forms. 'When I was trying' is unnecessary and unclear; 'father's often promised' incorrectly uses a contraction/possessive and an adverb placement issue — it should be 'my father often promised'. 'When I get away' is present tense and idiomatic error; the past tense 'when I got a high score' is appropriate to match the past context. Remove redundant phrases and place adverbs correctly. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for childhood recollections and avoid contractions that change meaning.

× I think it's actually not, and because I don't go to park much now because I move away from my hometown to attend university, I'm usually busy with classes and studying, so I don't have much time to go to this kind of place.

✓ I don't really go to parks much now because I moved away from my hometown to attend university. I'm usually busy with classes and studying, so I don't have much time to visit parks.

The sentence mixes present and present-perfect/past meanings incorrectly. 'I think it's actually not' is vague and unnecessary. 'I move away' should be past tense 'I moved away' because the move happened in the past and explains current situation. Use plural 'parks' and 'visit parks' for natural phrasing. Break into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: use past tense for completed actions that affect the present and consistent vocabulary ('visit', 'parks').

× Oh yes definitely there's the only one parking Mercedes which is not enough public green.

✓ Oh yes, definitely — there is only one parking area, which is not enough public green space.

The phrase 'the only one parking Mercedes' is worded incorrectly; likely meant 'only one parking area'. 'Which is not enough public green' needs a noun: 'not enough public green space'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: replace incorrect nouns/adjectives with appropriate terms ('parking area', 'green space') and ensure modifiers attach to the correct noun.

× Oh I mean we did not in a place with green space for all the resident.

✓ I mean we do not have enough green space for all residents.

The original sentence lacks a main verb and uses incorrect prepositions and articles: 'we did not in a place' is ungrammatical. Use 'do not have' to indicate lack and plural 'residents'. Also 'enough' clarifies quantity. Suggestion: use a clear subject-verb-object structure and correct noun plurals.

× I think the city should build more parks and small gardens because they provide place for exercise, relaxation and community events.

✓ I think the city should build more parks and small gardens because they provide places for exercise, relaxation, and community events.

Minor noun-number agreement: 'provide place' should be 'provide places' or 'provide a place'. Also add a comma before the final item in the list for clarity. Suggestion: ensure noun forms match ('places') and punctuate lists properly.

× Oh is a hard question, but if I have to choose I will type the Hoyan Park in Tanguy province to the nice parks I will want to go in the future because the advisement provides a lot of sightseeing with a spectacular view.

✓ That's a hard question, but if I have to choose, I would pick Hoyan Park in Tanguy province as one of the nice parks I would like to visit in the future because it offers many sights and spectacular views.

The original sentence has many structural and word-choice errors: 'Oh is a hard question' needs a subject ('That is a hard question'). 'I will type' is incorrect verb choice; use 'I would pick' or 'I will choose'. 'to the nice parks I will want to go in the future' is awkward; use 'as one of the nice parks I would like to visit in the future'. 'advisement' is wrong word; use 'it offers' or 'it provides' and replace 'sightseeing with a spectacular view' with 'many sights and spectacular views'. Also adjust modal verbs to express hypothetical preference. Suggestion: use appropriate verbs ('pick', 'visit'), correct nouns ('sights', 'views'), and maintain conditional mood ('would').