Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear and concise: start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question, avoid mispronunciations and filler words, and use correct nouns (e.g., 'park' not 'bath' or 'part'). Add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Keep under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. In my neighborhood park I often played on the swings and played football with my friends after school. We also had picnics there, which made the place feel safe and cheerful.

Gợi ý: Respond directly and correct word choices: use 'parks' not 'bars', and avoid unclear words like 'laser'. Give a concise reason using linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so'). Limit to two or three sentences and avoid excessive hesitations.

Ví dụ: Not really. I rarely go to parks now because I have a heavy workload and extra classes after school, so I usually spend my free time studying or resting.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct answer (Yes/Definitely) and use accurate verbs and phrases (e.g., 'create more parks' or 'invest in parks' instead of 'view more parks' or 'flush the air'). Provide a specific reason and one brief benefit, linked with words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because pollution from vehicles and factories has damaged air quality. More parks would increase green space and help improve air quality and residents' well-being.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and keep it natural: state the place clearly, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid hesitations and grammar errors (e.g., 'offers me' -> 'offers' or 'has'). Keep within three sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Disneyland next summer. I plan to go with my best friend because it has many outdoor activities and plenty of green space where we can relax and make good memories.

× Well, yes, I like going to bath when I was a child, especially the small part in my neighborhood, I used to play on the swings and play football with my friends after, uh, school time and you know, even, we even, uh, had picnics here, but so it felt safe and fun.

✓ Well, yes, I liked going to the park when I was a child, especially the small park in my neighborhood; I used to play on the swings and play football with my friends after school, and we even had picnics there because it felt safe and fun.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I like' with past context 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'I liked' to match the time frame. Also 'bath' is incorrect word choice and should be 'park'; 'small part' should be 'small park'; remove filler words and correct connectors for clarity. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for memories and simplify connectors. ---

× I don't go to bars much anymore. I haven't gone since I started high school because I have a lot of homework and extra classes after school which exhaust me and leave me no time for laser.

✓ I don't go to parks much anymore. I haven't gone since I started high school because I have a lot of homework and extra classes after school which exhaust me and leave me no time for leisure.

The student likely intended 'parks' but said 'bars' and later 'laser' instead of 'leisure' — these are word choice errors rather than grammar per se. Also present perfect 'I haven't gone since I started high school' is correct. Correction: use 'parks' and 'leisure' for intended meaning. ---

× Of course in the modern age our environment is being destroyed by the emissions from vehicles and factories, so I want the government view more parks to flush the air and green the city in near future.

✓ Of course, in the modern age our environment is being damaged by emissions from vehicles and factories, so I want the government to create more parks to clean the air and green the city in the near future.

Errors: missing 'to' after 'want the government' — use infinitive 'to create' (modal/verb pattern). 'Being destroyed' is acceptable but 'being damaged' suits common collocation. 'View more parks' is incorrect verb choice; use 'create' or 'build'. 'Flush the air' is wrong collocation; use 'clean the air'. Add article 'the' before 'near future'. Suggestion: use 'want the government to + verb' and choose correct collocations. ---

× Given the chance, I would choose Disneyland for my next summer holiday. Umm, I plan to go there with my best friend to create some, umm, beautiful memories together. The place offer me umm, a lot of outdoor games and green space for hanging out with friends.

✓ Given the chance, I would choose Disneyland for my next summer holiday. I plan to go there with my best friend to create some beautiful memories together. The place offers me a lot of outdoor activities and green space for hanging out with friends.

'The place offer me' has a subject-verb agreement error: singular subject 'place' requires 'offers' (third person singular). Also 'outdoor games' is acceptable but 'outdoor activities' is more natural. Remove fillers. Suggestion: ensure third-person singular verbs end with -s and choose natural collocations. ---