Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my friends and cousins to play on the swings and try different rides, and we would share snacks while watching other children play.

Gợi ý: Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'go to baths' -> 'go to parks'), be concise and use linking words to organise reasons. Give specific times and types of exercise to be more precise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually go in the morning to run and do stretching exercises because regular exercise helps me manage stress and stay healthy.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use clear vocabulary to explain reasons. Use linking words (for example, 'because' and 'therefore') and provide a specific problem and one potential benefit of more parks.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because the population is growing and the current number of parks is insufficient. More parks would reduce overcrowding, improve air quality, and give residents more space for exercise and relaxation.

Gợi ý: Be specific about which park and why. Use linking words to add reasons and avoid filler words. Mention one or two distinct features that make the park attractive.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Central Riverside Park, which is farther from my home but much larger and more famous. It has a lake, walking trails and botanical gardens, so I want to go there to enjoy the scenery and take photographs.

× Yes of course as every child enjoy going to park and I was, I am.

✓ Yes, of course, as every child enjoys going to the park, and I did too.

This sentence shows subject-verb agreement and article problems. 'Every child' is singular so the verb should be 'enjoys' (ID 27 and 1). Also 'going to park' needs the definite article 'the park' (ID 22/17). The original also mixes tenses awkwardly; 'I was, I am' is unclear, so use 'I did too' to indicate past enjoyment. Suggestion: match the verb form to the singular subject and include appropriate articles.

× I was also a child.

✓ I was a child.

This sentence is redundant and oddly stated. The simple past 'I was a child' is correct to describe childhood (ID 6). Remove 'also' unless comparing to someone else. Suggestion: use concise past tense when referring to being a child.

× I enjoy going to park and play with my friends and cousins and enjoy taking rides and many things we eat there.

✓ I enjoyed going to the park and playing with my friends and cousins; I enjoyed the rides and the food there.

Multiple errors: article missing before 'park' and noun phrases need articles (ID 22/17), verb forms inconsistent—mix of present and past—so use past to match 'as a child' (ID 6), and coordinate verbs need gerunds after 'enjoy' when listing actions (ID 8). Suggestion: maintain consistent tense, use 'the park', and use gerunds ('playing', 'taking', 'eating') or rephrase with 'I enjoyed'.

× Yes, of course I enjoy going to bath till now because at my age I have much workload and I go to park at the morning and I do some running and fitness exercise to prevent me from many diseases and I stay always happy healthy whenever I go to park for running.

✓ Yes, of course I still enjoy going to the park because at my age I have a heavy workload; I go to the park in the morning to run and do fitness exercises to prevent illnesses, and I always feel happy and healthy when I go running there.

Errors include incorrect article use ('going to bath' should be 'going to the park' — article and wrong noun), tense and word choice issues (ID 6), pluralization and quantifier problems ('much workload' should be 'a heavy workload' — ID 14), preposition errors ('at the morning' should be 'in the morning' — ID 11), gerund usage after verbs ('do some running and fitness exercise' needs plural/gerund consistency — ID 8/13), inappropriate pronoun 'prevent me from many diseases' should be 'prevent illnesses' (ID 12), and word order/adverb placement ('I stay always happy healthy' should be 'I always feel happy and healthy' — ID 20/13). Suggestion: use correct articles, consistent present tense, proper prepositions, and idiomatic collocations ('heavy workload', 'in the morning', 'feel happy').

× Yes, of course I would like to see more park because there is lessen uh pass in our city and the city is much crowded as compared to the quantity of the park.

✓ Yes, of course I would like to see more parks because there is less open space in our city, and the city is very crowded compared to the number of parks.

Errors include singular/plural mismatch ('more park' should be 'more parks' — ID 1), incorrect word choice 'lessen uh pass' likely intended as 'less open space' or 'fewer parks' (ID 26), and awkward comparison 'as compared to the quantity of the park' should be 'compared to the number of parks' (ID 19/14). Suggestion: use plural for countable nouns, choose correct vocabulary ('open space', 'parks'), and use idiomatic comparative phrases.

× There are very low quantity of parks as compared to the, as compared to the population we have in our city.

✓ There is a very low number of parks compared to the population in our city.

'Quantity of parks' is unnatural; use 'number of parks' for countable nouns (ID 14). Subject-verb agreement: 'There are very low quantity' is wrong; with 'a low number' use singular 'is' (ID 27/1). Also redundant repetition 'as compared to the, as compared to the' should be removed (ID 26). Suggestion: say 'There is a low number of parks compared to the population.'

× Yes, of course I would like to go to the park, which is a a far more, uh, far more, uh, uh, away from my home and uh, it is much bigger than as compared to the park, which is near to me.

✓ Yes, of course I would like to go to the park which is much farther from my home and much bigger than the park near my home.

Errors: double 'a a', filler words, and inaccurate comparative structure 'far more ... away' — use 'farther' or 'much farther' for distance (ID 7/25). 'Much bigger than as compared to the park' is redundant; use 'bigger than the park near my home' (ID 26/25). Article 'the park' is correct for specific parks. Suggestion: remove fillers, use 'farther' for distance comparisons, and simplify comparative phrasing.

× So I would like to go there and it is most famous park in our city.

✓ So I would like to go there because it is the most famous park in our city.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'most famous park' (ID 17/22) and missing conjunction to show reason—use 'because' (ID 16). 'Most famous' is a superlative and requires 'the' (ID 25). Suggestion: include 'the' and connect the clauses to show causality.