Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答总体意思清楚，但存在发音/断句问题、句子碎片较多且有语法错误（例如“place sea salt together”和“built a hard relationship”不合适）。建议连贯地说出主题句，使用1–2个具体细节并用连接词（because/so/for example）使表达更流畅。注意使用正确的词汇（e.g. “play games together”, “built strong friendships”）并保持每个答案不超过5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they let me relax from schoolwork and enjoy free time. For example, my friends and I often played games and had picnics together, which helped us build strong friendships. Those visits were always fun and refreshing.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子断裂、重复和词汇错误（如“perms”应为“parks”或“parks’ paths”）影响流畅性。建议先给主题句，再用连接词（however/so/also）补充1–2个具体细节，避免重复，同时修正词汇并改进语法（e.g. “I talk to other dog walkers”）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, although I don't go with many friends anymore. I usually walk my dog there and often chat with other dog owners, which I find both interesting and relaxing.

Gợi ý: 回答有明确观点，但存在重复（“Parks. Parks”）、用词不当（“Greenland”应为“green spaces”或“greenery”）和部分句子不够紧凑。建议用一到两句清楚表达理由，并用连接词（because/so/therefore）给出具体好处，如空气质量、休闲空间和宠物社交。保持句子连贯且不超过5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like more parks because green spaces improve air quality and provide places to relax. They would also give me more opportunities to walk my dog and for it to socialise with other pets.

Gợi ý: 回答表达愿望明确，但句子碎片较多、时态和连贯性欠佳（例如“I had heard it. When I was little”应连成一句）。建议先直接给出公园名称和原因，再用1–2个具体细节说明兴趣来源或想做的活动（e.g. wildlife watching, geysers）。使用连词（because/when/so）提高流畅性。

Ví dụ: I would love to visit Yellowstone National Park in the USA because I have read about its amazing natural scenery and geothermal features. When I was a child I saw it in my English textbook, and I especially want to see the geysers and observe wildlife in their natural habitat.

× Going to parks meant that I could totally relax from my homework and. Classes at school.

✓ Going to parks meant that I could totally relax from my homework and classes at school.

原句中有不必要的句点将句子拆开，导致句子结构不完整。应将“and”后面的部分与前文连成一个连续的短语，保持句子完整性。建议避免在句中随意断句，确保连词后接完整成分。

× And I could play with. My peers.

✓ And I could play with my peers.

原句在“with”之后错误地使用了句点，造成介词短语被切断，句子不完整。应将介词和宾语放在同一连续短语中。

× For example, we place sea salt together, and we built a hard relationship.

✓ For example, we played sea-salt games together, and we built a strong relationship.

原句“place sea salt together”意义不明，疑为拼写或词汇误用；且“built a hard relationship”搭配不当。根据语境应使用过去时的“played”或其他具体活动，并将“hard”改为表示关系稳固的形容词“strong”。（注意：根据题单仅改正列出的类型，已将词汇和搭配修正以使句子通顺。）

× Although I don't have so many friends to accompany me when going to the parks.

✓ Although I don't have so many friends to accompany me when I go to the parks.

原句是一个从属连词“Although”引导的从句，但写成独立句导致不完整。应把时间状语用一般现在时“when I go”并与主句连在一起，或将从句改为完整句。

× I have a dog and I walk the dog in the perms.

✓ I have a dog and I walk the dog in the parks.

原句单词“perms”显然为拼写错误，应为“parks”。同时“the dog”可以保留指代前文提到的那只狗。注意检查拼写以避免误用词。

× Talk to people who also who are also walking dog and.

✓ I talk to people who are also walking their dogs.

原句缺乏主语且有重复“who also who are also”，并以连接词“and”结尾导致不完整。应补上主语“I”，去掉重复，并将“dog”改为复数或所有格“their dogs”以符合习惯用法。

× That's just interesting and relaxing to interacting with people you don't know.

✓ That's just interesting and relaxing to interact with people you don't know.

原句中“to interacting”搭配错误。动词不定式“to”后应接动词原形“interact”，而不是动名词“interacting”。因此应改为“to interact”。

× Parks are a crucial component of the city's Greenland, so.

✓ Parks are a crucial component of the city's green land, so...

原句“Greenland”首字母大写且为特定名词（格陵兰），与语境不符。应改为可数/不可数短语“green land”或更自然的“green space”。此外句末“so”后应接主句或省略句末省略号，保证句子完整。

× I'm willing to have more chances to breathe fresh air and keep my dog company and let it make new friends.

✓ I'm willing to have more chances to breathe fresh air, keep my dog company, and let it make new friends.

原句在并列动词短语之间缺少连词和标点，使读起来不够流畅。应使用并列结构中的逗号和最后的“and”来连接三个并列动作者，保持平行结构。

× Well, I have been dreaming about going to the Yellowstone Park in the USA I had heard it.

✓ Well, I have been dreaming about going to Yellowstone Park in the USA; I heard about it when I was little in the English textbooks at school.

原句时态混乱且句子断裂。“have been dreaming”与之后的“I had heard it”时态不一致，且“heard it”用法不当，应为“heard about it”。同时需要将后半句与时间状语连贯地放在一起，使用简单过去时“heard”描述过去听到的事实更合适。