Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and subject-verb agreement, avoid repetition, and add one specific reason or short example. Keep answer under five sentences and use linking words if adding detail.

Ví dụ: Not really. I preferred parks as an adult because I used them for exercise to improve my physical health. For example, I began jogging there every morning when I was twenty, which helped me get fitter and more energetic.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence (Yes or No) then add two concise supporting details with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid filler phrases and pronoun confusion. Use specific activities to illustrate why you go.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I go mainly to get fresh air and to exercise, such as jogging or doing stretching routines, which helps me relax and stay healthy.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear opinion, then balance it with a reason and a brief consequence using linking words (however, although, but). Correct grammar (conditionals) and be specific about benefits.

Ví dụ: I don't personally need more parks because there is one near my house that I use regularly. However, I would welcome additional parks because they could improve air quality and provide more recreational space for the whole community.

Gợi ý: State your future plan clearly, use correct conditional forms, and give a specific example of a park or a reason why you want to visit. Keep it concise and link ideas with words like 'if' and 'because'.

Ví dụ: If I study abroad, I would like to visit famous central parks such as Central Park in New York because I read about them as a child and I want to see their landscapes and cultural activities in person.

× I'm not really, I prefer go to the parks as a as an adult because I want just to go to have some exercises to improve my, to improve my, my physical health, not as a child.

✓ I'm not really; I prefer going to parks as an adult because I just want to exercise to improve my physical health, not as a child.

The sentence has incorrect verb forms and word order. 'Prefer go' should be 'prefer going' (verb + -ing after prefer). 'Just to go to have some exercises' is awkward; replace with 'just want to exercise' for correct verb and noun usage. Remove redundant commas and repetition. Use 'parks' (no article) when speaking generally.

× Yes, although I not, I'm not really like going to park as a child.

✓ Yes, although I do not really like going to parks as a child.

Missing auxiliary 'do' for negation in present simple: use 'I do not really like'. 'Going to park' needs plural or article; use 'going to parks' for general activity. Maintain present simple form for habitual likes.

× I'm, I am a people. They're like going to the parks because I want to go there to have the fresh air and also have some exercises.

✓ I'm one of those people; I like going to parks because I want to get fresh air and also exercise.

'I am a people' is incorrect; 'people' is plural. Use 'one of those people' or 'one of them'. 'They're like going to the parks' should be 'I like going to parks.' 'Have the fresh air' is unnatural; use 'get fresh air.' 'Have some exercises' -> 'exercise' (uncountable) or 'do some exercises.' Adjust pronouns and verb forms accordingly.

× There's a park near my house, so I think more parks in my city is not very necessary for me.

✓ There's a park near my house, so I think more parks in my city are not very necessary for me.

Subject-verb agreement with plural 'more parks' requires 'are' not 'is.' The existential 'There is' is correct for a singular park, but the second clause must match plural subject.

× But I think if there is more, if there are more parks, the air quality is can be improved.

✓ But I think if there are more parks, the air quality can be improved.

Redundant 'is' before 'can be improved' is incorrect. Use modal 'can' directly with passive 'be improved.' Also simplify 'if there is more, if there are more parks' to a single conditional with correct plural verb.

× One of my goals in the future is to go to study abroad and if I have the chance to go study abroad, I would like to go to some central parks because I have read it in so many of my books when I was a child.

✓ One of my future goals is to study abroad, and if I have the chance, I would like to visit some central parks because I read about them in many of my childhood books.

'Go to study abroad' is incorrect; use 'study abroad' or 'go abroad to study.' 'Go to some central parks' -> 'visit some central parks.' 'I have read it in so many of my books when I was a child' mixes tenses and pronouns: use simple past 'I read about them' and 'childhood books' for clarity. Maintain conditional 'would like' for hypothetical future.