Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammatical correctness, tense consistency and clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence, use past tense for childhood, avoid fillers like "uh", and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word (for example "because" or "and").

Ví dụ: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because my family often spent special days there. For example, my father would take me and my friends to play football and we would have a picnic, which made those days very memorable.

Gợi ý: Use correct grammar and simpler sentence structure. Start with a topic sentence in present tense, remove filler words, and provide one or two specific examples or reasons using linking words such as "because" and "for example". Also correct noun and article usage (e.g. "my city has beautiful parks").

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because my city has several beautiful green spaces. For example, Mahinda Park is perfect for picnics with friends, so we often choose it when we want to relax together.

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and specific. Give a clear opinion sentence, use correct plural and possessive forms, avoid repetition, and add a specific reason or example with a linking word such as "because" or "for instance".

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide peaceful places to relax. For instance, new parks with flower beds and small statues would give people more options for picnics and family outings.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence about future plans using correct future tense, avoid disfluent fragments, and give a specific name or feature of the park and a short reason. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas and correct verbs (e.g. "I will go").

Ví dụ: In the future, I would like to visit the national park near my city because it is famous for its wildlife. However, I am currently busy, so I will plan a visit when I have more free time.

× Yes, I like going to parks as a child because, uh, Dad's day or so memorable day and me and my friends going to the parks to enjoyable, enjoyable.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because my father's days were very memorable and my friends and I enjoyed going to the parks.

The sentence refers to childhood (past), so verbs should be in the past tense (liked, were, enjoyed). Subject pronoun order and form must be correct ('my friends and I' not 'me and my friends'). 'Dad's day or so memorable day' is unclear and was corrected to 'my father's days were very memorable' for clarity and grammatical agreement. Suggestion: use consistent past tense when describing past experiences and place the subject before 'and I'.

× Yes, I still like to going, uh, parks now because, uh, Nepalgons city have a beautiful, beautiful parks, just like Mahinda parks and it is A and if we are going to picnic with friends, so we prefer to going the parks.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now because Nepalgon's city has beautiful parks, such as Mahinda Park, and when we go on picnics with friends, we prefer going to the parks.

After 'like' the correct form is the gerund ('going'), not 'to going'. Use correct preposition 'to parks' and possessive form 'Nepalgon's city' (or simply 'my city'). Subject-verb agreement: 'city has' not 'city have'. Use singular for 'Mahinda Park' and correct noun phrases: 'go on picnics' and 'prefer going to the parks'. Suggestion: use 'like + -ing', ensure subject-verb agreement, and use consistent prepositions.

× I like to see more park in my city.

✓ I would like to see more parks in my city.

The speaker intends plurality ('more parks') not singular 'park'. Also, 'I would like' is a more natural polite expression for a wish. Suggestion: use plural when speaking of an increased number and use 'would like' for preferences.

× They are so, uh, good places. And we also, uh, have to relax or have a picnic with their friends and they have so many types of different types of flowers and they have some statues.

✓ They are very nice places. We can relax or have a picnic with our friends; the parks have many different kinds of flowers and some statues.

Pronoun misuse: 'their friends' and 'they have' confused subjects. Use 'our friends' when referring to the speaker's group. Avoid redundant phrasing ('so many types of different types'); use 'many different kinds'. 'Have to' implies obligation; use 'can' or 'we can' for ability/possibility. Suggestion: keep pronouns consistent with the speaker and avoid redundancy.

× In my future if I am going to other park, there is a National Park in the IT is located by. I really want to go there but now I am so busy in my personal life so if I free then I will going to the national.

✓ In the future, if I go to other parks, there is a national park located nearby that I really want to visit, but now I am busy with my personal life, so if I am free then I will go to the national park.

Several tense and construction issues: 'In my future' should be 'In the future'. Use simple present 'if I go' for conditional with future intent; use 'will go' for future action. 'I will going' is incorrect; use 'I will go'. 'Located nearby' is clearer than 'in the IT is located by'. Use 'visit' for going to a national park. Suggestion: use standard conditional forms and correct future tense 'will + base verb'.