Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "very" multiple times) and tense consistency (use past tense for childhood).

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I usually went with my mother on weekends, where I met friends and we played football and tag, which was a fun way to relax and socialize.

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and avoid repetition. Use linking words (however, although) to contrast past and present, keep sentences shorter, and correct grammar ("the park", "busy schedule"). Provide a specific frequency and a brief reason.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy parks, but I rarely go now because my schedule is very busy. However, I try to visit the park once a month to relax and recall pleasant childhood memories.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion then support it with two specific reasons. Improve sentence structure and word choice ("recommend having more parks", "unwind after work"). Avoid awkward phrasing like "space to them."

Ví dụ: Yes, I would recommend having more parks in the city because they provide green space for residents to unwind after work and offer safe play areas for children. Additionally, parks can improve air quality and community well-being.

Gợi ý: Be specific and concise: state clearly whether you have a particular park in mind, name it correctly, and give one or two reasons why you want to visit. Remove repeated words and fix phrasing ("I haven't visited it yet").

Ví dụ: I don't have many specific parks in mind, but I would like to visit my city's Central Park because it's famous for its lake and walking trails, and I want to see the views and try the boat rides.

× Yes, I like it very much.

✓ Yes, I liked it very much.

The question asks about childhood ('Did you like going to parks as a child?') so the past tense should be used. Change the present 'like' to past 'liked' to match the time frame. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs when referring to past habitual actions.

× This was the best way to relax and I used to go with my mother, especially during weekends.

✓ This was the best way to relax, and I used to go with my mother, especially on weekends.

The sentence correctly uses past tense but the preposition 'during weekends' is unnatural; 'on weekends' is the correct collocation. Also add a comma before 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'on weekends' for habitual weekend activities.

× There I got to meet my friends and we enjoyed the park time very much.

✓ There I met my friends and we enjoyed our time at the park very much.

'Got to meet' is informal and unnecessary here; simple past 'met' is clearer. 'Park time' is awkward; use 'time at the park' and add the possessive 'our' to show it was shared. Suggestion: Prefer simple past for completed past events and use natural prepositional phrases like 'time at the park'.

× We played different sports.

✓ We used to play different sports.

In context of childhood habits, 'used to play' emphasizes habitual past actions. Simple past 'played' is not incorrect, but 'used to' better matches 'as a child' context. Suggestion: Use 'used to' to express regular past habits.

× Yes, I still like going to park, but now because of my busy busy schedule, I do not have enough time to go to park.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks, but because of my busy schedule, I do not have enough time to go to the park.

'Going to park' needs the plural 'parks' when speaking generally or the article 'the park' when speaking about parks in general. Repetition 'busy busy' is redundant. Use 'the park' for general singular reference. Also remove extra 'now' which is unnecessary. Suggestion: Use articles appropriately ('the park') or pluralize ('parks') for general statements; avoid repeated words.

× So usually I don't go or visit parks, but sometimes once in a month I go there and remember my old memories.

✓ So usually I don't visit parks, but sometimes, once a month, I go there and remember old memories.

Use 'visit parks' instead of 'go or visit parks' (redundant). Use 'once a month' rather than 'once in a month.' 'Remember my old memories' is redundant; 'remember old memories' or better 'reminisce' would be more natural. Suggestion: Use 'once a month' and avoid redundant verbs and phrases.

× It was a very, very good time.

✓ It was a very, very good time.

This sentence is grammatically correct in past tense and fits context. No change needed. Suggestion: None.

× Yes, I would rather recommend to have more parks in city spaces as it gives more open and green space for people to relax or unwind after the work and people, especially children will have more space to them.

✓ Yes, I would recommend having more parks in city spaces, as they give more open green spaces for people to relax or unwind after work, and people, especially children, will have more space.

'Would rather recommend to have' is incorrect; use 'would recommend having' or 'would rather have.' 'Gives' should agree with plural 'parks' so use 'give.' 'After the work' should be 'after work.' 'Space to them' is incorrect; omit 'to' or say 'space for them.' Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: Use correct verb patterns after 'recommend' (recommend doing), ensure subject-verb agreement, and use proper prepositions ('after work', 'space for them').

× I don't have any specific specific park in my mind, but the Central Park of my city Town Park is very famous and I am yet to visit it, so I would like to go there one day.

✓ I don't have any specific park in mind, but the Central Park of my city, Town Park, is very famous and I have not visited it yet, so I would like to go there one day.

Remove repeated 'specific specific.' 'In my mind' is more natural than 'in my mind' is fine but 'in my mind' kept. Use commas to set off the park name. 'I am yet to visit it' is awkward in American English; use 'I have not visited it yet.' Suggestion: Avoid word repetition, place commas around appositives, and use natural negative perfect tense 'have not visited it yet'.